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Altaf Hussain Malik · #21 05-13-2006, 07:10 PM

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Originally Posted by Shagufta Basit

Qasim, merey bhai

aisa kab howa k tumhari kisi ghazal per reply na miley hon.... mujhe nahi pata k log aap k siggy ki waja sey aisa kar sakain gai... kyu k tum acha likhtey ho... shairi k ramoz ko jantey ho ....tumhari shairi ko saraha jata hai hamesha sey yahan... ye baat ajab lagi mujhe tu

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aur dosri baat ye k jin buzuragaan-e deen ka naam tumharey siggy main ata hai wo sab ki musalmano k leye qabil-e ehtaram hain.... koi aisa nahi kar sakta ... kum aaz kum main tu aisa soch bhi nahi sakti.. na hi kabhi tumhari koi post kabhi khaali dekhi main nay...hamesha tumhare kalaam ko saraha gaya ... tumhari qabliyat ki bunyaad pe... poets club main mazahib ki buniyaad pe tu shairi nahi parhi jati

khush raho likhte raho ..

Piyaari behna,

Aap nay bohat khubsoorat andaaz main Qasim bhai kay gilay ko door karnay ki koshish ki hay, meri tamaam tar purkhaloos duaain aur alfaaz aap ki is koshihs ki taaeed main hain, Allah Qasim bhai ko aur bohat acha likhnay aur phir us par daad wasool karnay ki taufeeq day, Aameen.

Altaf Hussain Malik · #22 05-13-2006, 07:14 PM

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Originally Posted by Shagufta Basit

Altaf bhai:

bhaii pehli baar aap ka kalaam humari nazar sey guzra .. aur yaqeen janeye humain bohat acha laga... aik bhar por nazm likhne pe dheroo dher daad qobool kejeye

mazeed kalaam ka intazar rahey ga

khush raheye likhte raheye

Salam Behna jee,

Main kiya kahoon kay baar-e-mamnooniyat say meray alfaaz-e-tashakur jhukay jaatay hain, aap nay jin khubsoorat alfaaz ko zarya-e-mawaslat banaya hay yeh haqeer un ko dil ki gehraaion main basad ehtemaam saja raha hay takay un ki khushboo say hosla pa kar mazeed likhnay ka jazba aur shaoor milay. jeeti rahiye, aur apni sistraana duaaon main yaad rakhiye ga.

**:Qassim:** · #23 05-13-2006, 07:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shagufta Basit

Qasim, merey bhai

aisa kab howa k tumhari kisi ghazal per reply na miley hon.... mujhe nahi pata k log aap k siggy ki waja sey aisa kar sakain gai... kyu k tum acha likhtey ho... shairi k ramoz ko jantey ho ....tumhari shairi ko saraha jata hai hamesha sey yahan... ye baat ajab lagi mujhe tu

....

aur dosri baat ye k jin buzuragaan-e deen ka naam tumharey siggy main ata hai wo sab ki musalmano k leye qabil-e ehtaram hain.... koi aisa nahi kar sakta ... kum aaz kum main tu aisa soch bhi nahi sakti.. na hi kabhi tumhari koi post kabhi khaali dekhi main nay...hamesha tumhare kalaam ko saraha gaya ... tumhari qabliyat ki bunyaad pe... poets club main mazahib ki buniyaad pe tu shairi nahi parhi jati

khush raho likhte raho ..

Aapii aap jaise logoN kii muhabbat kii wajah se maiN achchha likhne laga hooN ... Wagarna to merii adabii dunya meN kya haisiat hai?

Iss baat ko maiN ne aik shair meN Dhaalne kii koSHiSh kee hai:

Dunya e shair goii meN :Qassim: ka kya muqaam hai
:Ghaalib:, :Anees: se yahaaN ustaad haiN guzar ga'ay

**aik_dam_farigh** · #24 05-13-2006, 09:28 PM

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wah dear bro buhat khub :clapping2
buhat acha likha hai aap ne par kar acha laga
kush raho buhat Ameen

Altaf Hussain Malik · #25 05-14-2006, 09:27 AM

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Originally Posted by aik_dam_farigh

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wah dear bro buhat khub :clapping2
buhat acha likha hai aap ne par kar acha laga
kush raho buhat Ameen

Salamz jee,

Bohat bohat shukriya, aap nay meri kaavish ko pasandeedgi ki nazar say daikha, aap jeetay rahain aur apnay khoobsoorat andaaz say harf-o-maani kay zuhaab jaari rakhain,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,, bohat khush rahain.

**Raji** · #26 05-15-2006, 02:07 PM

Altaf Hussain SaaHeb:
Walaikum Assalam:
aap kee is naZm ko beshak naZam kahaa jaa saktaa hai. ek mukammal Khayaal ko bohat KhoobSoortee se nibhayaa hai aap ne. lafzooN ka chunao aur nazm ka bahao donoN hee apnii jagah bohat dilkash heN.
meree jaanib se ek khoobSoorat taKhleeq par dilee daad aur mubarakbaad qubool keejiye.
aap kee mazeed taKhleeqaat ka bhi intizaar rahe gaa
MuKhliS
Zahida Raees :Raji:

**T@nHa muS@F!r** · #27 05-16-2006, 05:01 PM

,

aray wah ji wah

shagird jee, kiya khoob joolaniyan dikhai hain, main apni mitti say door kiya aya hoon, peechay say meri seat sambhaalnay chal diye, ,,,,,

buhat nice, buhat umda, buhat he pleasent, buhat he fluent, ustaad ka naam roshan karo gay, jeetay raho, khush raho, zaraa wapas aa loon ap say aik tafseeli nashist bhi karni hai, kuch sawaal tishna hain, kuch jawaabon ki talab hai, kuch jaankaari ki khoj hai, kuch mann ki baatain share karni hain, inshallah, 27 ko wapas aa raha hoon, or most probably 30 ko mulaqat ho gi. buhat se pur khaloos duaaon kay saath.

ustaad jee.

**Aik Lamha** · #28 05-16-2006, 08:55 PM

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Originally Posted by Qismat Ka Sataya

Mere iss signature kii wajah se mujhay yaqeen hai hamaare ka'ee dost merii posts per reply kerna pasand naheiN kerte ... Laikin agar maiN iss haqeeqat ko chupaadoN to mere khayaal se maiN ne apnii pehchaan kho dee ... Merii posts per "no-reply" mujhay manzoor hai, magar apne signatue se yeh image haTaanaa manzoor naheiN

Mere signature meN jo Image hai, woh maiN ne khud create kee hai ... Agar aap chaahaiN to maiN aapko bhii link day sakta hooN taakay aap bhii isay apne signature meN lagaanaa chaahaiN to lagaa sakte haiN

Ya Ali Madad.

Assalam-0-Alaikum Qasim Bhai... @};-

aap nay aisa kaisay soch liya... ye saari hastiyaaN tou khud hamaray liye hud darja qabil-i-ahteram heiN.. aur in ki muhabbat bhi hamaray eeman ka lazmi juzv hay... .

aur mujhay ye yaqeen hay kay yahaaN koi aik bhi aisa member nahiN hoga.. jo isski buniyad per aap ki post ko ignore keray ga.. aap itnay achay shayer heiN... meiN tou aap k threads ki target killing kerta hoon ..means chun chun k parhta hooN...

Allah aap ko aur bhi acha likhnay ki salahiyat se nawazay.... aur aap kay qalam meiN aur bhi zor paida karay...

aur tamam wahem apnay dil-o-dimagh se nikal dijiye.... @};-

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