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Old 05-13-2006, 05:35 PM
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Salamz jee,

Pehli dafa aik kaavish paish karnay ki jassarat kar raha hoon, apnay ustaad-e-mohtram Qibla Irfan Ali Minhaas, jo HG par Tanha Musafir kay name say jaanay jaatay hain, un ki ijazat say main musafir ka takhalus istemaal kar raha hoon, aap ki musbat tanqeed mujhay khaamion ko door karnay main aur aap ki hosla afzaai mujhay mazeed likhnay par maail kar sakti hay, agar aap ki nazar main yeh tehreer nazam kehlanay kay qaabil hay aur kisi adbi meyaar par utarti hay to apni raaiy zaroor den, shiddat say muntazir.



Jal pari hooN
devta kay des say
paigham laanay walay
panchi
un say kehna
ab talak
daasi ki aankhoN maiN
tumhaara roop hay
haaN
piyaaray panchi
yeh bhi kehna kay
yeh daasi
us samey tak
aankheiyoN ki chilmanoN maiN
khaab paalay gi
kay jab tak
hijr kay sunsaan mausam
chatt na jaaeiN
wasal kay phooloN ki khushboo
lay kay jab tak
devta jee
tum naa aao gay
haaN
panchi
yeh bhi kehna
devta jee
teri daasi dar rahi hay
kay
jo aankhaiN khol baithi to
kaheeN
yeh zeest kaa haasil
tumhaara khaab
aur woh hijr kay lamhay tumhaara
murr kay taknaa
bheegi palkoN ki faseeloN say
na chann jaaey
o panchi
yeh bhi kehna hay
kay
pagli jal pari ab
yeh safar
aur yeh riyaazat
yeh aqeedat
yeh ibaadat
paanioN ki hasratoN meiN
teh ba teh
uthee hui
saffaak maujoN kay
piyaasay
neelay hontoN par
kisi pal
seh naa paaey
devta jee
is kahaani main bhi
paapan jal pari
majboor-o-bay kas
piyaar maiN
bay haal-o-bay bas
ishq kar kay
phir akeeli reh naa jaaey
devtaa jee
teri daasi
aansoo'oN maiN beh naa jaaey.









musafir


Wah saahab wah! Kya khoobsurat khayaal baandhaa hai aap ne nazam meN ... Nazam bohot pasand aa'ee hamaiN ... Iss ghareeb kii jaanib se bhii dilii mubaarakbaad aur daad qubool kee jiay aik mukammal aur pur.acar nazam kehnay per

youNhii maShq jaarii rakhiay ... InSha'Allah bohot jald meyaarii kalaam kehnay lagaiNgay (dua)

Khaaksaar,

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:
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Old 05-13-2006, 05:38 PM
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Waaahhhhh Kia Kahneyn Khoobsorat
Sagar jee, salam

Mohtram aap ki hosla afzaai kaa bohat bohat shukriya, jeetay rahiye, bohat khush rahiye.
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Wah saahab wah! Kya khoobsurat khayaal baandhaa hai aap ne nazam meN ... Nazam bohot pasand aa'ee hamaiN ... Iss ghareeb kii jaanib se bhii dilii mubaarakbaad aur daad qubool kee jiay aik mukammal aur pur.acar nazam kehnay per

youNhii maShq jaarii rakhiay ... InSha'Allah bohot jald meyaarii kalaam kehnay lagaiNgay (dua)

Khaaksaar,

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

Salam Qassim Bhai,

Aap nay jis kamaal-e-meharbaani say meray haroof-e-saada ko sharf-e-pazeeraai bakhsha meray liye maan ki baat hay, aap jaisay harf shanaas log yaqeenan bohat ehtiyaat say kisi kalaam kay baaray main raaey daitay hain, main samajhtaa hoon kay HG par doston nay jis mohabat ka muzaahira kiya hay meri tawaqa say ziyaada izat afzaai ki hay, mujhay meri mehnat ka samar mil giyaa, (110) aap salamat rahain, aap ka aviator bhi acha laga, Mola aap ko jazaaey khair dain, jeetay rahiye, khush rahiye.
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Salam Qassim Bhai,

Aap nay jis kamaal-e-meharbaani say meray haroof-e-saada ko sharf-e-pazeeraai bakhsha meray liye maan ki baat hay, aap jaisay harf shanaas log yaqeenan bohat ehtiyaat say kisi kalaam kay baaray main raaey daitay hain, main samajhtaa hoon kay HG par doston nay jis mohabat ka muzaahira kiya hay meri tawaqa say ziyaada izat afzaai ki hay, mujhay meri mehnat ka samar mil giyaa, (110) aap salamat rahain, aap ka aviator bhi acha laga, Mola aap ko jazaaey khair dain, jeetay rahiye, khush rahiye.
Mere iss signature kii wajah se mujhay yaqeen hai hamaare ka'ee dost merii posts per reply kerna pasand naheiN kerte ... Laikin agar maiN iss haqeeqat ko chupaadoN to mere khayaal se maiN ne apnii pehchaan kho dee ... Merii posts per "no-reply" mujhay manzoor hai, magar apne signatue se yeh image haTaanaa manzoor naheiN

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Ya Ali Madad.

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Mere iss signature kii wajah se mujhay yaqeen hai hamaare ka'ee dost merii posts per reply kerna pasand naheiN kerte ... Laikin agar maiN iss haqeeqat ko chupaadoN to mere khayaal se maiN ne apnii pehchaan kho dee ... Merii posts per "no-reply" mujhay manzoor hai, magar apne signatue se yeh image haTaanaa manzoor naheiN

Mere signature meN jo Image hai, woh maiN ne khud create kee hai ... Agar aap chaahaiN to maiN aapko bhii link day sakta hooN taakay aap bhii isay apne signature meN lagaanaa chaahaiN to lagaa sakte haiN

Ya Ali Madad.
Salamz Qasim Bhai,

Thanks, itnay quick reply ka, jee, zaroor main is link ko apnay paas save karna chaahon gaa, mashoor shaair, ustaad baydam paani pati ka sher hay kay:

Baydam yahi to paach hain maqsood-e-kaainaat
Khair-un-nisa, Hussain-o-Hassan, Mustafa, Ali

so jee, ab acha bura lagna to bohat zaati sa tajurba hota hay, aur main is baat kaa qaail hoon kay apni raaey kisi par musalat nahin karni chaahiye aur na he kisi ki raaey say apna koi kaar-e-khair chor dena chaahiye. at this moment i m totally satisfied with my recent signature, but inshallah in some future time , i would like to use this signature.

Jeetay rahiye, bohat khush rahiye.
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Salamz Qasim Bhai,

Thanks, itnay quick reply ka, jee, zaroor main is link ko apnay paas save karna chaahon gaa, mashoor shaair, ustaad baydam paani pati ka sher hay kay:

Baydam yahi to paach hain maqsood-e-kaainaat
Khair-un-nisa, Hussain-o-Hassan, Mustafa, Ali

so jee, ab acha bura lagna to bohat zaati sa tajurba hota hay, aur main is baat kaa qaail hoon kay apni raaey kisi par musalat nahin karni chaahiye aur na he kisi ki raaey say apna koi kaar-e-khair chor dena chaahiye. at this moment i m totally satisfied with my recent signature, but inshallah in some future time , i would like to use this signature.

Jeetay rahiye, bohat khush rahiye.
Mera bhii aik shair mulaahiza fermaalaiN:

Faatima, Haider o Hasnain o Rasool e Arabii
TiShnagii duur huvii Kausarii chaShma paayaa

Not a problem mere bhai ... When ever you feel you are ready to you my image, just send me a PM and I will be more than happy to help you out

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Mere iss signature kii wajah se mujhay yaqeen hai hamaare ka'ee dost merii posts per reply kerna pasand naheiN kerte ... Laikin agar maiN iss haqeeqat ko chupaadoN to mere khayaal se maiN ne apnii pehchaan kho dee ... Merii posts per "no-reply" mujhay manzoor hai, magar apne signatue se yeh image haTaanaa manzoor naheiN

Mere signature meN jo Image hai, woh maiN ne khud create kee hai ... Agar aap chaahaiN to maiN aapko bhii link day sakta hooN taakay aap bhii isay apne signature meN lagaanaa chaahaiN to lagaa sakte haiN

Ya Ali Madad.
Qasim, merey bhai

aisa kab howa k tumhari kisi ghazal per reply na miley hon.... mujhe nahi pata k log aap k siggy ki waja sey aisa kar sakain gai... kyu k tum acha likhtey ho... shairi k ramoz ko jantey ho ....tumhari shairi ko saraha jata hai hamesha sey yahan... ye baat ajab lagi mujhe tu....

aur dosri baat ye k jin buzuragaan-e deen ka naam tumharey siggy main ata hai wo sab ki musalmano k leye qabil-e ehtaram hain.... koi aisa nahi kar sakta ... kum aaz kum main tu aisa soch bhi nahi sakti.. na hi kabhi tumhari koi post kabhi khaali dekhi main nay...hamesha tumhare kalaam ko saraha gaya ... tumhari qabliyat ki bunyaad pe... poets club main mazahib ki buniyaad pe tu shairi nahi parhi jati

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