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This is a discussion on ---jahan mein jaa nahi sakta meray asshaar jatay hein-- within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Dalassay detay hein,samjhatay hein or harr jatay hein yun ik ik kar kay mehfil say meray sab yaar jatay hein ...
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| Dalassay detay hein,samjhatay hein or harr jatay hein yun ik ik kar kay mehfil say meray sab yaar jatay hein Suna ho ga kisi say, dard ke ik had bhe hoti hai milo hamsay kay ham aksar he uskay parr jatay hein Wo apnay ghar ke dewaroun pay inko likhti rehti hai jahan mein jaa nahi sakta,meray asshaar jatay hein fakhar kartay hein ispar, ISHQ,gharor-e-zaat hai mera Pehan kar iss ke russwai,sar-e-bazar jatay hein Daroun-e-jaan sulaghtay hein,bazahir kuch nahi hota zakham phir zakhm hein inkay kahan assaar jatay hein Gilay rakhtay ho dill mein or hamsay kuch nahi kehtay yehi chup-chap say andaz hamko marr jatay hein. umarbarque |
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| Hi.4 aur last shair bhut achay lagay. khush rahiea Yasmin Yasi |
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| bahot khoob Umar saaheb,bahot hi khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai aap ne,tamaam ash.aar bahot pasand aaye,so bahot si daad qabool kijiye,is khoobsurat kaawish par, ![]() bahot khush rahiye, ![]() aek guzaarish aor bhi karta chaloon ke POET CLUB main aap aek din main SIRF 1 THREAD hi post kar saktey hain,aor aek se ziyaada post ki gayi threads ko zam kar diya jaata hai,so please aainda is tarf bhi tawajah dijiye ga, bahot khush rahiye, ![]()
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| nice................ .....
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#5
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| suna hoga kisi se dard ki ek had bhi hoti hai milo hum se ke hum aksar hi uske paar jate hain. bahut khhob.........aap achha likhte hain.sare ashar achhe lage. |
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| Gilay rakhtay ho dill mein or hamsay kuch nahi kehtay yehi chup-chap say andaz hamko marr jatay hein. tamam ashar hi be hadd khoobsurat hai'n .. boaht acha likhte hai'n aap.. keep writing n sharing with us ![]()
__________________ ![]() . . Tere is jahaN maiN aye Khuda..woh nahi to lagta hai kuch nahi |
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| nice................ .....
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#8
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| wonderfull....bohat kamal ka likha hey aap ney..........mazeed ka intizar rahey ga@};-
__________________ Kuch Aansoo Kuch KhushiyaaN Dey Kar Taal Gaya Jeevan Ka Ik Aur Sunehra Saal Gaya ...!! Meri Zaat Zarra E Bey NishaaN Mera Ishq Naghma E Bey Nawa |
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