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RulesThis is a discussion on ---jahan mein jaa nahi sakta meray asshaar jatay hein-- within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Originally Posted by Barque Dalassay detay hein,samjhatay hein or harr jatay hein yun ik ik kar kay mehfil say meray ...
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06-29-2007, 12:41 PM
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bai wah bohat khoob, bohat achi ghazal share ki hy ap ne ham se, khas kr ye sher: Suna ho ga kisi say, dard ke ik had bhe hoti hai milo hamsay kay ham aksar he uskay parr jatay hein is sher ne choNka diya, sari ghazal hi khoob hy, so meri janib se bohat si daad is achi ghazal ki nazr.... ager garaN na guzry to aik do bateN mazed arz kruN ga, is misry meiN wazn ki kami ka ehsaas hua: fakhar kartay hein ispar, ISHQ,gharor-e-zaat hai mera 5th sher k shuru meiN lafz "zakham" ghalat talafuz pr istamal kia hy aap ne, halaNkay dusry muqam pr durust talafuz pr istamal kiya.... so nazr-e-sani kr leN.... isi trha acha acha likhty raheN aur ham se share krty raheN, Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziada ata kary, khush raheN, aabad raheN....
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06-29-2007, 06:46 PM
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bohaat bohaat shukrea tamaam doston ka jo meray inn adhoray fikron ko par laytay hein Faizan bhai yahan na to 'zakhm' say kaam chaal raha tha na hi 'zakham' say zakham thora behtar laga to ye he likh dea orr wo dosri jaga parr bhe waqeya he wazaan pora nahi hai but ahissta ahissta behtari aa hi jaye gee agar app doston ke meharbani rahi again thanks umarbarque Bazeecha-e-itfaal hai duniya meray aagay Hota hai shab-o-roz tamasha meray aagay Ek khel hai aurang-e-sulemaan meray nazdeek Ed baat hai ejaz-e-maseeha meray aagay |
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07-03-2007, 09:02 AM
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**** nice ****
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07-03-2007, 10:41 PM
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Daroun-e-jaan sulaghtay hein,bazahir kuch nahi hota zakham phir zakhm hein inkay kahan assaar jatay hein Bohat zabardast...Halat-o-Wakiyat Daikhty hain app bi ....Good |
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