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This is a discussion on Jagtti ankh k khawab within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Kal ki rat bohat hi be chain guzri Khulli ankhoon se khawab bunty bunty Khud hi hassti rotti rahi. Main ...
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| Kal ki rat bohat hi be chain guzri Khulli ankhoon se khawab bunty bunty Khud hi hassti rotti rahi. Main nay dekha hatoo main tera hath hai Dil nasheen din orr raat hai Mery qadam ba qadam tera sath hai Main hastti muskaratti Hawaoo main urti phirtti hoon Main khoob hastti hoon khoob hastti hoon Achanak manzar bala meri jagtti ankh ka Na jany raat ka tha kon sa pehar Har soo sanata ghoor sanata tha Na to tha na tera sayaa tha Bas aik khawab tha jo jagtti aknoon main dar ayya tha Phir main khoob rotti hoon khob rotti hoon Kal ki rat bohat hi be chain guzri Khulli ankhoon se khawab bunty bunty
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#2
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| buhat umdha nazam hi................
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#3
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| jagti ankhon ka yeh khwab bahut khoob raha.keep sharing
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#4
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Khayal-e-Nazm Nay Mujhay Bouhat Mutasir Kiya...Umda Kaawish Kay Liye Daad Qubool Kijiye...![]()
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#5
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| wa g naila buhat khubsurat kavish jagti ankho k khuwab really nice kavish all the best
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#6
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| Wah Buhat Purasar aur Khoobsurat Nazam Kahi App Ne.....Very Nice |
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#7
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| Hi. mashallah bhut khubsurat ghazal hai dua k saath Yasmin Yasi |
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#8
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achi nazm kahi hy aap ne.... khas kr khyalaat aur un ka baaha'o bohat acha hay, lekin abhi wohi purana masla derpesh hy aap ki naazm ko, misroN ki rawani ka, alfaaz k rhythm ka... aur ye rhythm us waqt tak paida nahi ho sakta jab tak aap urdu shairi k rumooz se waqfiat hasil nahi kr letiN... mager mashq-e-sukhan her haal meiN jari rakheN... k is se aap k thoughts aur qalam flow meiN rehta hy... likhti raheN, aur ham se share krti raheN... Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziada ata kary, khush raheN, aabad raheN...
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