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Old 08-27-2008, 03:26 PM
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SALAM FRNDS AP SAB K SAMNE AIK TAZA NAZM PESH KAR RAHAY HAIN HOPE U ALL ENJOY IT.APNI RAEY SE AGAH ZAROR KARYEGA


laga hai dher mere pas tu pichle zamane ka
jagah baqi nahi koi naey saman ki ab tu
pare hain kuch adhore khuwab k tukre
hasee_n arman bhi hain sath main bikhre
mita ziyada likha kuch kuch hua ek khat porana sa
wo tare torh lane ka koi jazba dewana sa
likhe qissey meri ek dairy main kuch ajab se hain
muhabbat k sabhi tuhfu khudaya kia ghazab k hain
qalam ,jourha ,likhi namoun ki do sipi
tumhare wastey nazmein ,ghazal likhi
pari hain pas bebas si tere milne ki wo shamein
chupaey mun ko roti hain kabhi hansti thin ju batein
laboun k geet bhi dil k kisi kone main soey hain
kahan jate yeh gham lekar nigahoun main piroey hain
abhi bhi ainey main aks ek dhundla sa baqi hai
bichar jane ka wo ek khof mera ab bhi sathi hai
agar aein koi khushya_n bhala kese wo aingi
mere ghar main kahan khali koi gosha wo paingi
agar aao tu lejao yeh sab kuch hi tumhara hai
tumhare chor jane per inhein main ne sambhala hai
yeh sab saman le lo ghar mera khali zara kardo
bohat weran hun aker mujhe phir se hara kardo
sila dedo mujhe pas e wafa ab tak nibhane ka
laga hai dher mere pas tu pichle zamane ka
jagah baqi nahi koi naey saman ki ab tu.............

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buhot khoob !
cute sis..
apki nazm padhkar behad khushi hui...
buhot ravani hai..
aur buhot anokha andaaz.e.bayan laga..
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very nice................ ............
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bohat bohat achi nazm likhi hay aap ne Maria Sahiba.... bohat umda... ye misra to bohat hi pasand aaya:


kahan jate yeh gham lekar nigahoun main piroey hain

baei bohat hi umda... meri janib se bohat si daad is qadar achi takhleeq ki nazr... Allah Taala aap ko aur ziada ata kary.... likhti raheN aur ham se sahre krti raheN khush raheN aabad raheN....


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buhot khoob !
cute sis..
apki nazm padhkar behad khushi hui...
buhot ravani hai..
aur buhot anokha andaaz.e.bayan laga..
bohat shukriya gul aapka
apna khayal rakhyega
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very nice................ ............
shukriya sohail sahab apka
apna khayal rakhyega
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bohat bohat achi nazm likhi hay aap ne Maria Sahiba.... bohat umda... ye misra to bohat hi pasand aaya:



kahan jate yeh gham lekar nigahoun main piroey hain



baei bohat hi umda... meri janib se bohat si daad is qadar achi takhleeq ki nazr... Allah Taala aap ko aur ziada ata kary.... likhti raheN aur ham se sahre krti raheN khush raheN aabad raheN....


bohat shukriya faizan sahab apka apni raey se agah kiya aur sab se barh ker kafi arse baad humari kisi poetry per apki nazar pari us k lye bohat shukriya koshish jari o sari hai
apna khayal rakhye
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vaaaah vaaaah ji wah wah,,,,umaid hai daad wasool karny ko jagah zaroor hogi bahut aala,,,,,,
God bless u,,
Doaon main yaad rakhna,,,,,
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