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RulesThis is a discussion on Jab teri man main pyaas jagi within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Jab teri man main pyaas jagi ZiNdgi tab hi kuch khaas lagi Tum ur kar samNdat paar gayi Par mujhko ...
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#1
12-08-2006, 11:59 PM
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Jab teri man main pyaas jagi ZiNdgi tab hi kuch khaas lagi Tum ur kar samNdat paar gayi Par mujhko phir bhi paas lagi Bin teray mujhay yeh rut basanti Bus nitdin ik chaumaas lagi Sach boli to aitbaar nahi Par khooti baat vishwaas lagi Jo jag ko hansaati phirti thi Woh larki kal kyuN udaas lagi -------------------
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12-09-2006, 01:39 PM
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Jo jag ko hansaati phirti thi Woh larki kal kyuN udaas lagi wahh wahhhh kya khoobsurat shair kaha janab aap nay.. bohat khoob... keep sharing take care
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12-09-2006, 05:22 PM
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achhi koshish hai saahib,go ke abhi mazeed mehnat chaahati hai, 1.gif ")1") bahot khush rahiye,aor likhte rahiye,
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12-09-2006, 09:25 PM
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achi kawish rahi.... khayalat umda rahay.... dad qubool kijiye khush rahiye
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12-09-2006, 09:36 PM
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 Khayaal-e-Nazm Bouhat Pasand Aaya..Aap Ki Nazmo'n Ka Khayaal Mujhay Bouhat Mutassir Karta Hay..Is Nazm Kay Liye Bhi Daad Qubool Kijiye..
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12-10-2006, 07:52 PM
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I am thankful to all for the kind words.This poem is more of a practice as it was after so many months that I wrote something. Yes,Haya,I am essentially a poet of ideas as Mr Khushwant Singh,has written to the introduction of my owrk.You can read it at ebazm.com/sagar Once again thanx |
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#7
12-10-2006, 08:25 PM
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ZiNdgi tab hi kuch khaas lagi wah bohut umdah daad kabool farmaaye
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12-11-2006, 06:20 AM
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hmm umdah kavish hai .. daad qubool kijiye  mile
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12-12-2006, 10:12 AM
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bohat khoob jnaab... achi kawish hy..
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