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RulesThis is a discussion on jab sdaa uTThi k "ab khamoshi" within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; As-salam-o-alaikum aaj kuch zyada hi arsy k baad aap se aik ghazal share kr raha huN, aap ko jesi bhi ...
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04-29-2008, 12:57 PM
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As-salam-o-alaikum aaj kuch zyada hi arsy k baad aap se aik ghazal share kr raha huN, aap ko jesi bhi lagy, apni raa'ay se zuroor nawazi'ay ga.  ==================== = jab sdaa uTThi k "ab khamoshi" ik tzab-zub meiN thi tab khamoshi aabla-paa hui meri aawaaz kis musafat pe hy ab khamoshi log to sunty rahy san'naata mujh se kehti gaei sab, khamoshi TooT ja'ay na ye aa'eina-e-khawb rooTh hi ja'ay na ab khamoshi neind meiN Dooby hu'ay ahiN alfaaz, aaj Dhaa'ay gi ghazab khamoshi haalat-e-ghair meiN hy tanhaei aur hy mohr-ba-lab khamoshi dil na faizan lagy mehfil meiN, rooh pr cha'ei ho jab khamoshi ==================== = 1.gif ")1") paRhny / berdasht krny ka bohat shukriya
__________________ ------------------------------------------------- Bedil libaas-e-zeest bohat deeda-zeb tha aur ham ne is libaas ko ulTa pehan liya... (Bedil Haidri) Last edited by WanderingThoughts; 04-29-2008 at 01:51 PM.                  |
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04-29-2008, 01:25 PM
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Wah Faizaan bhai wah kamal ki ghazal likhi ha apnay, khubsurat andaz khubsurat takhayul or alfaaz ka behtareen chonao. her shair tareef kay qabil hai, Allah apko humaishah khush rakhay Ameen.
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04-29-2008, 01:55 PM
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salam buhut zabardast faizan sahab kiya kamaal ky khayal hain buhut aala ghazal hy aap ki hamari taraf sey buhut c mubarak w/salam
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04-29-2008, 03:06 PM
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BOHAT KHOOB FAIZAN SAHAB KAFI ARSE BAAD APKI KOI GHAZAL PARHNE KO MILI LEKN BOHAT KHOOB MILI  HUMKO APKI GHAZAL BOHAT PASAND AAIAPNA KHAYAL RAKHYEGA |
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04-29-2008, 05:06 PM
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bohat hi zabardast aur khoob gazl kahi hai aap ne .................... ....lafzoon ka istemal bohat aacha laga khush rahiye
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04-29-2008, 05:38 PM
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Wah Faizaan bhai wah kamal ki ghazal likhi ha dad kabool karin ........
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04-29-2008, 08:01 PM
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aabla-paa hui meri aawaaz kis musafat pe hy ab khamoshi log to sunty rahy san'naata mujh se kehti gaei sab, khamoshi wah wah wah..diffrent sa lehja aur andaz bohat khoob janab...likhtay rahin aur khush rahin 
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04-29-2008, 11:39 PM
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 aabla pa hui meri aawaz.. wahhhhh... bohat hi khubsooorat.. aur achoota sa khayal hai... bohat hi umda.. janab jaldi jaldi share kia kijiye.. takay humara seekhnay ka amal aagay baRhta rahay bohat khush rahiye
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jab sdaa uTThi k "ab khamoshi" 
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