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This is a discussion on Jab Say Kisi Ki Mujh Pay Inayat Nahi Rahi within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Assalam.O.Alaikum Kuch Din Paihlay Saahir Ji Ki Aik Ghazal Read Ki Thi Jo Mujhay Bouhat Pasand Aai Thi... '' Peihli ...
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06-15-2007, 11:39 AM
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Assalam.O.Alaikum  Kuch Din Paihlay Saahir Ji Ki Aik Ghazal Read Ki Thi Jo Mujhay Bouhat Pasand Aai Thi... '' Peihli Si Unki Nazr-e-Inayat Nahi Rahi '' Usi Zameen Par Aik Kaawish Mairi Bhi Hay, Jisay Paish Kar Rahi Hoo'n... Jab Say Kisi Ki Mujh Pay Inayat Nahi Rahi Mujh Ko Bhi Zindagi Ki Zaroorat Nahi Rahi Ham Nay To Khoon Apni Tamanna Ka Kar Diya Lo Ab To Tum Ko Koi Shikayat Nahi Rahi Hansna To Chahtay Hai'n Magar Kis Tarha Hansai'n Muddat Guzar Gai Kay Yeh Aadat Nahi Rahi Us Aainay Mai'n Tujh Ko Karai'n Kis Tarha Talash Jis Aainay Ki Khud Koi Soorat Nahi Rahi Aey Gardish-e-Jaha'n Hamai'n Ab Koi Gham Na Day Ab Tairay Naaz Uthanay Ki Taqat Nahi Rahi Raihnay Day Tana Zann Yoo'nhi Aehbab Ko Háya Is Tarha Sun Kay Jaisay Sama'at Nahi Rahi (Háya)
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06-15-2007, 11:58 AM
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buhat umdha hi...............
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06-15-2007, 12:05 PM
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us aaene main tujh ko karein kis tarah talash jis aaene ki khud koi soorat nahin rahi kamal ka sher hai.bar bar parhne per bhi sairabi nahin hoti.dheron daad aap ki is kavish ke liye.
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06-15-2007, 12:14 PM
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zaberdast kavish haya apki kavish buhattt pasand ayi really nice buhat si daad qabool keray itni khubsurat kavish k leya 1.gif ")1") wish u all the best
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06-15-2007, 12:23 PM
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Us Aainay Mai'n Tujh Ko Karai'n Kis Tarha Talash Jis Aainay Ki Khud Koi Soorat Nahi Rahi Bayhadd umdaah ghazal kahee aap ne haya jee, tamaam sher hee umdaah hain bht achay second last sher k misra e saani main "Naaz othaanay" per sakta sa feel ho raha hai aur behar disturb lagg rahi hai. Aap daikh lee jiya ga Regards
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06-15-2007, 12:27 PM
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Waaaahhhh Kia Hii Kahneyn Bohut Hii Khoobsorat Ghazal Kahi Haya Aap Neyn Excelent@};-
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06-15-2007, 01:03 PM
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Hansna To Chahtay Hai'n Magar Kis Tarha Hansai'n Muddat Guzar Gai Kay Yeh Aadat Nahi Rahi zabardast haya ji  3
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06-15-2007, 01:06 PM
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All verses are really commendable......... you deserve profound appreciation.
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