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This is a discussion on jab jena ho tana tanha within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; dunya hai aik mela sa phir bhi her shakhs yahan akala sa kis kay kandhay per ser rakh ker kis ...
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| dunya hai aik mela sa phir bhi her shakhs yahan akala sa kis kay kandhay per ser rakh ker kis ko sunaie hal dil apna phir pyaar mohabat kia mani jab jena ho tanha tanha kuch loog yooun hi hastay rahtay hain dokh roz naya setay rahtay hain magar kartay nahi hain koi shikwa phir pyaar mohabat kia mani jab jena ho tanha tanha rishtoon kay bech ho duri se aur aag ka bahta howa darya ho phir pyaar mohabat kia mani jab jena ho tanha tanha subha se lay ker sham dhalay kion koi kisi kay sath chalay jab apni apni ho manzil aur apna apna ho rasta phir pyaar mohabat kia mani jab jena ho tanha tanha kuch loog milay aur chor gay sab qasmay waday toor gay phir pyaar mohabat kia mani jab jena ho tana tanha mehwish afsar |
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| waah zabardast likha hai MEHWISH jee,.........khush rahiye |
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| Very nice,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,khush rahiye
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| very nice yeh likha giya i think kisi drama ka song hai
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| assalam o alaikum TAIMOOR HASSAN & FAZAL KHAN thank u so much..... ANSUU jee yeh mere apni likhi hoi nazam hai shayad aap ko is jumlay se kisi dramay ka gana laga ho " jab jeena ho tanha tanha phir pyaar mohbat kia mani " is nazam ki islah mere urdu ki teacher nay ki thi warna wo mujhay zaroor batatin.... waisay tareef ka shukria... mehwish afsar Last edited by MEHWISH AFSAR; 09-26-2008 at 02:33 PM. |
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| hmmm mehwish its really cool one ................... |
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| assalam o alaikum shukria aap ki tarfeef karnay ka.wisay jab aap tareef karnay ka haq rakhti hain tou tanqeed bhi ker sakti hain ![]() main her cheez positive lati hoon.... is tarhan mere islah hi hoti hai ![]() take care... mehwish afsar. |
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| Bohot Khoob.....nazam achi thi but last misra pe main thorra heraan huwa Parhtay Waqt Aakhri Misray K Mutaliq Main Nay bhi socha , Jaisa Aap Nay Kaha K Dramay ka song ho ga,, to waqyi ye Misra : Peyar Mohobbat keya mani. jab jeena ho tanha tanha" PTV k dramay ka title song hai...ye monday ko lagtay ga,aap bhi daikhain , bilkul yehi Bol hain us k is silsilay main aap kuch wazahat karain gi? Last edited by BH-Zia; 11-28-2008 at 06:42 PM. Reason: correction |
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