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jaane dil_vaaloN pe is daur meN kia guzregii!...merii ek Ghazal

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Old 03-03-2007, 12:34 AM
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Smile jaane dil_vaaloN pe is daur meN kia guzregii!...merii ek Ghazal

salaam dosto,

aaj aapkii Khidmat meN ek Ghazal le kar Haazir huaa huuN. ummeed hai k aapkii tab'a-e-naazuk par baar-e-garaaN na hogii. Hasb-e-ma'mool, aapkii aaraa kaa shiddat se intizaar rahegaa. peshgii shukria adaa kartaa huuN

faqat Khaak_saar,

_______Hashmat Usmani


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phir bahaar aayii hai, gulshan se sabaa guzregii
jaane dil-vaaloN pe is daur meN kia guzregii!

2.
le uRii hai yeh bahaaroN kaa junooN_Khez payaam
unke kooche se bhii ho kar yeh sabaa guzregii

3.
noor se hoNge dar_o_baam-e-tasavvur raushan
jab mire zehn se yaadoN kii ziyaa guzregii

4.
subHa_dam nik'hat-e-gul laayegii paiGhaam-e-visaal
gul_'azaaroN kii nigaahoN se Hayaa guzregii

5.
aatish-e-gul se lapakte haiN hawaaoN meN sharaar
soorat-e-sho'la gulistaaN se hawaa guzregii

6.
jhuk ke qadmoN meN gire jaate haiN gul-posh shajar
sahn-e-gulshan se vo rangeen adaa guzregii!

shukria bahot bahot
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WalaikumAssalam
(hehe) Abhi To Yaha'n Say Mai'n Hi Guzar Rahi Thi Is Liye Ghazal Read Karnay Mai'n Hi Chali Aai (hehe)
Aap Ki Yeh Ghazal Bhi Bouhat Pasand Aai..Aap Ki Ghazlo'n Ka Munfarid Asloob Bouhat Acha Lagta Hay..Asatiza-e-Shaairi Ka Sa Rang Aap Ki Shaairi Mai'n Jhalakta Hay.. Ya Shayed Yeh Maira Waihem Ho (hehe)
Aap Ki Likhi Her Ghazal Mujhay Bouhat Pasand Achi Lagi..Bouhat Daad Qubool Kijiye...
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Buhat Khoob janab aik aur umdah ghazal aap ki taraf say parhnay ko mili aur buhat kuch seekhnay ko

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KHOOBSORAT GHAZAL KAHII DON BABOO KHUSH RAHEYEY SADDA@};-
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WalaikumAssalam
(hehe) Abhi To Yaha'n Say Mai'n Hi Guzar Rahi Thi Is Liye Ghazal Read Karnay Mai'n Hi Chali Aai (hehe)
Aap Ki Yeh Ghazal Bhi Bouhat Pasand Aai..Aap Ki Ghazlo'n Ka Munfarid Asloob Bouhat Acha Lagta Hay..Asatiza-e-Shaairi Ka Sa Rang Aap Ki Shaairi Mai'n Jhalakta Hay.. Ya Shayed Yeh Maira Waihem Ho (hehe)
Aap Ki Likhi Her Ghazal Mujhay Bouhat Pasand Achi Lagi..Bouhat Daad Qubool Kijiye...
is Ghazal ke ek she'r kahte huye meraa "qaafiyaa tang" huwaa waa thaa. achchhaa to, Hayaa saaHiba aapko hii dekh kar lagtaa hai meraa she'r mukammil huaa...thanx

aapke ta'reefe jumle paRh kar kahiiN mujhe Allah na kare Ghuroor na aa jaaye! >: asaatiza to door kii baat hai lagtaa hai aapko vahm hii huwaa hai vo bhii sone kii Haalat meN >:

shukria Hayaa saaHiba aapkaa bahot bahot...aapkii Hausalah-afzaaii mere liye baa'is-e-sad iftiKhaar o masarrat hai. ek baar phir maiN aapkaa shukria adaa kartaa huuN
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Buhat Khoob janab aik aur umdah ghazal aap ki taraf say parhnay ko mili aur buhat kuch seekhnay ko

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salaam sajal saaHiba,

aapkii dada o taHseen ke liye maiN be_Had shukr-guzaar huuN aur aapkii Hausalah-afzaaii baa'is-e-sad iftiKhaar o masarrat hai. maiN aapkaa mamnoon huuN

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KHOOBSORAT GHAZAL KAHII DON BABOO KHUSH RAHEYEY SADDA@};-
aapkaa bahot bahot shukria Saagar saaHib. aapkii Hausalah-afzaaii sar aaNkhoN par...apnaa Khayaal rakhiyegaa.

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bohat achi ghazal hay aap ki nice sharing.
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