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Ham apne is mizaj mei kisi k bhi na ho sake
Kisi se ham mile nahi,Kisi se dil mila nahi..

Thanks For appreciation

Thanks Bro.......

mashaAllah....bohot khubsoorat nazm likhi hai...bohot dilkash andaz-e-bayan hai...bohot si daad qubool kijye...Chand ek lines maiN rawani ka masla paida horaha hai....wo point out kar deta hooN

1. Gumaan-o-badgumaani ki
2. Phaila ke apni baaNhoN ko
3. To zindagi ke haathoN phir

In lines ko dobara dekh lijyega....overall khubsoorat nazm likhne per ek baar phir daad qubool kijye

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Adaab teri bazm ke jeenay nahiN daitay
DeewanoN ko jeenay ki tamanna to baRi hay
(Qabil Ajmeri)

Sonia jee bahut achi kaavish hai, mazeed likhti rahiye insha Allah aur nikhaar aaey ga.
Zemir.

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is dasht mein jal jal Zameer - e be asar ka Haal ab
DhooNDay waheeN per khak-e-dil, paaey jahaaN bhi rakh rakh

Bayhadd khobsoorat khiyaal baandha hai aap ne Soniya! aur Rania Khan ki Visualization ne iss nazm main jaisay jaan daal di hai. Bht lutf aaya perh ker. Misra number 4,7 aur 10 main rawaani ki kammi laggi ager aap inhain dobaara daikh lo tu nazm mazeed nikhar aai gi

regards

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Tu Aik Image Remove Ker Daitay Poora Signature Q Remove Ker diya

bahot khoob Sonia ji,bahot khoobsurat nazam kahi aap ne,so daad qabool kijiye,
jesa ke Saraab bhahi aor Aatif bhaahi ne kaha nazam ki 4,7,10 line maiN wazn ka masla hai,merey khayaal maiN agar aap in lines ko yooN kar leiN to wazn ka masla hal ho jaata hai,....wesey aap khud bhi is par soch sakti haiN,

#4 , badgumaaniyoN ki yeh,
#7, baazuoN ko pheilaa kar,
#10, zindagi ke haathoN phir,

aek khoobsurat nazam kehney par aek baar phir daad qabool kijiye,
bahot khush rahiye,

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