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~~@>insaan mohobat ke qabil nahi<@~~

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Old 09-17-2006, 04:41 PM
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Yeh zakhm dil ko mahez furqat ke hasil nahi
Gawah hain yeh k insaan mohobat ke qabil nahi

Kya hu kya main? Apne waalid ki chaabhi hu,
Ke bin unke rabba mere,main kamil nahi…

(Kaamil: Absolute, Complete, Whole)

mere khoon se rangein bhi hain haath uske,
aur tanz ye bhi ke wo mera qatil nahi

kahan se nikale ye kidhar aa pahunche,
kya lena in baton se meri koi manzil nahi

duniya hi nahi iska insaan bhi naya hai
jiski soch kya mohobat bhi mustaqil nahi

(mustaqil- resolute)
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salam doston,
ek ghazal paish karing,
umeed hai qabile-bardasht ho...
aapki ara ki muntazir,...
khush rahein aap sab..
FameanALLAH..@};-

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acha likha bhai aap nay......

keep sharing
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Kayal-e-Ghazal Bouhat Khoob Raha...Likhna Isi Tarha Jaari Rakhiye..Daad Qubool Kijiye...

Aap Kay Likhay Is Shair Ko Read Kar Kay Mujhay Apni Aik Ghazal Ka Shair Yaad Aa Gaya ..Share Karti Hu'n...

mere khoon se rangein bhi hain haath uske,

aur tanz ye bhi ke wo mera qatil nahi
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Haath Rangee'n Hai'n Us Kay Mairay Khoon Say
Aor Kehta Hay Zalim Mai'n Qaatil Nahi
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walikum asalam...

achi kawish hai chanda...khayalat achay haiN @};-

bas wazan ki prb hai, likhti raho, inshAllah woh bhi door ho jayegi..
aik aur bat, tumne matla maiN Hasil aur qabil ko qawafi banaya hai to is tarha tumhari ghazal ke qawafi qatil, sahil, kamil etc. hi hoNgay...

khush raho
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Asslamo alikum bohut hi achhi ghazal likhi hai aap ne daad kabool farmaaye
khass tor par yeh ashaar bohut achhay lagay
mere khoon se rangein bhi hain haath uske,

aur tanz ye bhi ke wo mera qatil nahi


kahan se nikale ye kidhar aa pahunche,

kya lena in baton se meri koi manzil nahi


duniya hi nahi iska insaan bhi naya hai

jiski soch kya mohobat bhi mustaqil nahi
likhti rahye aur share karti rahye
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bahot khoob ji,bahot achhi koshish rahi yeh aap ki daad qabool kijiye,
aek choti si baat arz karna chahoon ga,umeed hai aap mind naheen karain gi,
aek to wazn ki tarf bhi thori tawajah dijiye,aor doosara qawaafi (qaafiya ki jamma) ko bhi samjhane ki koshish kijiye,aap ki is ghazal main aakhari 2 sheron main aap ne qaafiya badal daala hai,is ki kuchh wazaahat MEHROO bhi apni posr reply main kar chuki hain,ho sake to in baaton ki tarf bhi tawajah dijiye ga,
beharhaal yeh koyi ghabraane ya pareshaan hone ki baat bilkul bhi naheen hai,shuru shuru main aesa ho jaata hai,likhna jaari rakhiye,INSHA ALLAH yeh kamzoriyaan bhi door ho jaayain gi waqt ke saath,
bahot khush rahiye.
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achi koshish hy My$tical...

nice thoughts... aap acha likhty ho, aap ki nai kawish ka intzaar rahy ga...

Zain aur Mehroo ki batoN k sath sath bary shoara ki poetry ka mutalia bhi zururi hy... so bary shoara ko read kreN aur try to learn k wo kesy alfaz ka istamal karty haiN... (because aik bat ko bayan karny k 100 mukhtalif andaaz hoty hain...)

Allah Mola aap ko bohat ata kary...
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