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ilteja kerti nigaahoN se tapakta aansu

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Old 10-03-2006, 02:16 AM
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aik aur mukhtasar si nazm, bilkul abhi abhi kahee hai


umer bhar bhool na paein gi wo manzar aankhein
hijr ki sa'at e awwal wo judaai ki ghari
surkh mehndi lagay haathoN pe saja harf e dua
ilteja kerti nigaahoN se tapakta aansu
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Old 10-03-2006, 06:04 AM
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ahsan....

is kadar mukhtasir nazam mein tum nai jo naksha kheencha hai woh bauhat khoob hai bauhat hi khoobi sai tum baat bayaan kargai ho :flower

khush raho aur yunhi acha acha likhtai raho
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aik aur mukhtasar si nazm, bilkul abhi abhi kahee hai


umer bhar bhool na paein gi wo manzar aankhein
hijr ki sa'at e awwal wo judaai ki ghari
surkh mehndi lagay haathoN pe saja harf e dua
ilteja kerti nigaahoN se tapakta aansu
Waaaahhhhhh Bohat khoob........Acha Likhaa Aap nay.....
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Acha likha janab.........khayal-o-alfaz pasand aye...khush rahye
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ilteja kerti nigaahoN se tapakta aansu
zabrdast bohut acha likha ap nay dehrayon dad qabol kegeay
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wahhhh....mukhtasir magar dil maiN utarti hui nazam....bohat hi khooob @};-

khush rahiye
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ilteja kerti nigaahoN se tapakta aansu...

bohat khoob... lutf mila parh kr...
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Bahut khob kahi hae mukhtasar laikin jame.
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wah wah wahhh

bohat hi khoob ..........