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This is a discussion on ik shab aankh kinaray neend se pehlay aao within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; salam...piyaray loago....aik adna si koshish k sath hazir hon aap ki qeemti raaye ka intizar rahy ga khush rahain aabad ...
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| salam...piyaray loago....aik adna si koshish k sath hazir hon aap ki qeemti raaye ka intizar rahy ga khush rahain aabad rahin...sorry frends ye prefix main pata nahin kaisay NAZAM ki bajayye.... muqa bila select ho gia...aur ab edit bhi nahin ho raha![]() ![]() s orry again...![]() Last edited by WanderingThoughts; 06-21-2007 at 08:00 AM. |
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| Buhat Umdaah Kanwal
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| Buhut khoob Kanwal ki .... Aap buhut acha likhtii ho ..... Aap ki muqabalay walii Nazm bhi parhii ... buhut lutf mila parh ker woh bhii ... Isi tarah likhtii rahiye n Keep sharing ![]() HASDE WASDE RAWO
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| buhat umdha kawash hi app ki
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#5
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| Jab bhi likhti hain kamal likhti hain.na jane kyunkar aise shahkar likhti hain.aik bar parhne se tabiat sair nahin hoti.daad to aap hi ka haq hai so hazir hai.
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| Esteemed kanwal..........mayr i study bahut kam hai laikun pehli dafa inti khoobsoorut nazam daikh ker bahut khushi howi hai.Mayre pas wo alfaaz nahin jo main ye nazam parh ker feel ker raha houn usse likh sukoun.For this indelible piece of creative work..........cheers .
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| "khawb safar pr sath chaleN gy, ik dujy ka hath pakaR kr, jhuty sachy ehd kreN gy, maiN kuch an'dekhy sapnoN ki ungli tham k le aaoN gi, tum kuch ru-pehli taabeireN, zad-e-safar k tor pe laaana..." kaNwal sahiba maiN is nazm k bary kuch keh kr is k husn ko alfaaz k dairy meiN qaid nahi krna chahta... bas itna kahuN ga k......... bohat shukriya ham se ye nazm share krny ka.... Allah Mola aap ko is se bhi ziada ata kary, likhti raheN, aur ham se share krti raheN... khush raheN, abad raheN.... prefix change krny ki aik try meiN bhi kr dekhta huN, shayad change ho ja'ay...
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| Assalam o alikum Kanwal! Bayhadd dil mooh lainay wali nazm aap ne share kee. Alfaaz ka chunaoo aur khiyalaat ka bahaoo bht umdaah Khush rehiya
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