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ik shaam udhar dedo

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Old 08-27-2007, 05:58 PM
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gaay dino kay kisi pal se ik shaam udhar dedo
bohat tarsi hon aab to mere dil ko qarar dedo

kai rooz se aankhon main koi khuaab nahi hai
meri aankhon ko ratjagoon ka khumar dedo

suna hia duaain takdeeren badal diya karti hian
loot aaoo kay meri duaaoon ko aetabar dedo

main bhatak gai hon wasosoon kay jangal main
ik baar pukaroo mujhe,meri sochon ko hesaar dedo
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gaay dino kay kisi pal se ik shaam udhar dedo
bohat tarsi hon aab to mere dil ko qarar dedo

bohat khoobsort....
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Old 08-27-2007, 09:24 PM
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achi kawish hai.. khayalat umda haiN apke... mashq jari rakhiye...ustad sho'ra ka kalaam parhiye.. na sirf khayalat behtar hoNgay... balkay wazan ka masla bhi hal hota jayega..

khush rahiye
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achi kawish hai apki......
likhti rahiye...
khush rahiye....
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very nice
bohat aacha likha aap ne
khush rahyee
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bahot khoob Mohtarma,yeh koshish bhi bahot khoob rahi,
yoonhi mashq-e-sukhan jaari rakhiye,INSHA ALLAH mazeed behtari aaye gi,kalaam main,
bahot khush rahiye,
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Khayaal To Khoob Paish Kiya Hay...Likhna Owr Share Karna Jari Rakhiye Insha Allah Bouhat Behtri Aaey Gi...Daad Qubool Kijiye...
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suna hia duaain takdeeren badal diya karti hian
loot aaoo kay meri duaaoon ko aetabar ded

very nice sharing bohat achi kawish ,, bohat ziada daad qabool kerin ore isi terha share kertayrehiye ga

bohat bohat ziada duoan kay sath
jahan rahon bohat bohat khush raho
emmran
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Old 08-28-2007, 12:12 PM
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Assalam......
bahut achchi ghazal hai aap ki
mujhe lagta hai ke aap ni mere zaban cheen li,
dua hai ke zindagi k har mur par aap ku kamiabi ha sil ho (amin)
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