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Ik raat dil ki rait pe ker k baser to daikh

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Old 05-21-2007, 05:27 PM
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bahot khoob Afzal saahib,achhi kaawish rahi yeh bhi,chand aek ash.aar to bahot pasand aaye,so daad qabool kijiye,
bahot khush rahiye.
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bohat achi hai ye
mujhe achi lagi
daad kbool kijeye (flower4u)


3..
Mera har meetha sauna ho tum
Har khat ka sunhara akshar ho tum
Pyar ki shuruat ho tum
Mere dil ki awaaz ho tum,
Jisse kiya hai pyar humne kya wahi ho tum.
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nice................ ..........
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bohat khub
wah kia ba'at hai

very nice
keep sharing
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Hota hai kaya ye ber lub-e- sahil qamer to daikh
Ik raat dil ki rait pe ker ke baser to daikh

Neeche wo jis ke ek din kaati thi hum ne raat
Phooloun tullay jhukki howi shakh-e- shajer to daikh

Ay Khizr kaya rukha hai us umr-e- daraaz main
Panni kissi ke payar ki punghut se bher to daikh

Behthi hain kitni sepiyahn mohn kub se khol ker
Aaghosh-e- mouj mein bhi kabhi doob ker to daikh

Chunta houn isleay haseen lafzoun ki seriyahn
Janahn ne yeh kaha tha k dil main utter to daikh

Kutte nahin hain kis tarah unjaan raaste
Tu sukhteay hayaat main hud se guzzer to daikh

In badiloun ki oat se ik pul to jhaank ker
Kitna uddas hai mayre dil ka nager to daikh

Phaila howa hai ufq ki chader peh kis ka khoon
Afzal ye aaj ghour se rung-e- saher to daikh
aik aur khubsurat ghazal paRhny ko mili ap ki janib se,,,
kuch ashaar ne bohat lutf diya,
lekin maqty ka khyaal dilkash hony k bawajud, wo taa'sur nahi choR saka, sirf aik lafz ki adaigi ki waja se. lafz "ufq" ka durust talafuz "ufaq" hy..
bra'y mehrbani maqty pr kuch kaam kr k isy bhi khubsurat shkl deN to ye gahzal mukamal tor pr aik umda kawish ho ja'y gi...

isi trha acha acha likhty aur ham se share krty raheN,
Allah Mola aap ko boaht ziada ata kary
khush raheN, aabad raheN....
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Old 05-22-2007, 08:50 AM
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salam bahi wah kia baat hai buhat khoob ghazal
Allah aap ko khush rakhay
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Old 05-23-2007, 10:24 AM
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wow! Buhat Umda

Nice Thinking.
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Old 05-23-2007, 01:44 PM
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