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Asalaam O Alaikum.......!!!

kaafi arsay k baad apni aik kaavish k saath aayii hoon........umeed hai pasand aaye ghii.......aap sab k comments ka intazar rahay gha............... shukriya.....!!!

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wa lekum salam

bahut achi kawish or bahut achi nazam hai... keep sharing...
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bohat aachi aur sada si nazam hai nayyab parh kar bohat aacha laga
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Nayab!
Arsay baad aap ko yahan daikha aur aap ki koee sharing perhi. Nazm bht pasand aai, Mamooli se tabdilyun se flow ko kuch behtar kia hai. Ager pasand na aai yeah gustaakhi tu paishgi mua'azrat
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line # 4: WOH khushi se maana kerti thee
line # 5: Tum doli lay ker aao gay? (na izaafi hai)
line # 6: Bass Yeah hi poocha kerti thee
line # 9: Yeah Ishq Muhabbat kia Shay hai
line # 10: Iss soch main ooljha kerti thee
line # 11: kabhi baat baat per hansti thee
line # 12: kabhi pehrooN roiya kerti thee
line # 15: Woh khawaab nagaer ki raani thee
line # 16: bass sapnay daikha kerti thee
line # 17: Ikk shokh c titli jaisi woh
line # 19: woh lerki thee NAYAAB bohat
line # 20: Jo mairi pooja kerti thee (yahan aap wala misra bilkul bhee nahin baith raha set)

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Nayab!
Arsay baad aap ko yahan daikha aur aap ki koee sharing perhi. Nazm bht pasand aai, Mamooli se tabdilyun se flow ko kuch behtar kia hai. Ager pasand na aai yeah gustaakhi tu paishgi mua'azrat
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line # 4: WOH khushi se maana kerti thee
line # 5: Tum doli lay ker aao gay? (na izaafi hai)
line # 6: Bass Yeah hi poocha kerti thee
line # 9: Yeah Ishq Muhabbat kia Shay hai
line # 10: Iss soch main ooljha kerti thee
line # 11: kabhi baat baat per hansti thee
line # 12: kabhi pehrooN roiya kerti thee
line # 15: Woh khawaab nagaer ki raani thee
line # 16: bass sapnay daikha kerti thee
line # 17: Ikk shokh c titli jaisi woh
line # 19: woh lerki thee NAYAAB bohat
line # 20: Jo mairi pooja kerti thee (yahan aap wala misra bilkul bhee nahin baith raha set)

Best regards
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Wasalaam Atif jii.......!!!

bohat shukriya k aap ko merii yeh kaavish achii lagii...........aur thank u soooooooooo much merii islaah karnay k liye..........abhii new hoon naa iss liye aisii islaah kii bohat zaroorat hai.......once again thank u sooooooooooo much...........!!!

May ALLAH bless u alwayz.........!!!
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