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Old 02-01-2007, 07:04 AM
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Old 02-01-2007, 09:24 AM
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bai wah Haya Saahiba....
achi kawish hy,
khawb ki takraar achi lagi,
bohat achy khyalaat bandhy,
so bohat si daad qubool kreN...


lekin kuch muqaamat pr, parhty waqt rawani toot'ti mehsoos hui.... misaal k tor pr, 2nd last misra, baqi nazm k rhythm se match nahi hota... isi trha kuch aur muqamat pr bhi aisa hi mehsoos hua. (ye meri bilkul zaati ra'y hy aur maiN ghalati pr bhi ho sakta hun...)

aap ki is bary maiN kiya raa'y hy...
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very nice haya sahiba bohat achi poem khas ker thoughts boht achay thay really bht khoob
boht ziada daad qaabol kerin ore isi terha share kertay rehin

bohat bohat ziadaa duaan kay sath
jahan rahin bohat khush rahin
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haya ma aj bohut dino baad HG per aya aor atay hi apka khubsurat aor munfarid andaz ka aik dilkash shahkaar parnay ko mila jisko par ker bohut khushi hoi, Haya mashallah ap apnay dili jazbat aor ihsasat ko barey khubsurat andaz aor khubsuart alfaz ma raqam karti hain.
Humaishah khush aor muskorati rahoo
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niceeeeeeeeeeeeeee waha
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bahut khoobsurat nazam kahi aap ne.daad qubool karein.
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boht khoob haya..boht umda nazm kahi tum nay...sachi baat hy mujhay boht achi lagi....ik khawb laho ban k dora..ik khawb rag o pay main utra,,
haya dil main utri tumhari khabeeda nazm...boht saari daad
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buhat buhat umda likhi aap ne mein ne designers poetry mein padhi or new member houn to galti se pehli barish ko haya samajh bethi or un se poch bhee lia but i got my answer here mashALLAH buhat khoubsurat nazam likhi hai aap ne
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