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Old 06-11-2008, 06:17 PM
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Azm e shorish jo sar e dar kia hay hum nay
Aaj ik ehhd ko baydaar kia hay hum nay

Dhoop pachtati hy jab say dil e awara ko
Waqif e saya e dewar kia hay hum nay

Paon main girya e zanjir liye phirtay hain
Dasht ko ronq e bazaar kia hay hum nay

Sham e gham ko tere yadon ky hawalay kr ky
Dil ko ankhon ka azadar kia hy hum nay

Nok e naiza pe hi sar apna sajay ga mazhar``
Bay'at e shah say inkar kia hay hum nay

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Azm e shorish jo sar e dar kia hay hum nay
Aaj ik ehhd ko baydaar kia hay hum nay

Dhoop pachtati hy jab say dil e awara ko
Waqif e saya e dewar kia hay hum nay

Paon main girya e zanjir liye phirtay hain
Dasht ko ronq e bazaar kia hay hum nay

Sham e gham ko tere yadon ky hawalay kr ky
Dil ko ankhon ka azadar kia hy hum nay

Nok e naiza pe hi sar apna sajay ga mazhar``
Bay'at e shah say inkar kia hay hum nay

(mazhar naqvi)
baei subhanAllah...... janab kamaal hi kr diya ... maza aa gya radeef ka bhi aur ghazal ka bhi.... chaa ga'ay ho serkaar....

Sham e gham ko tere yadon ky hawalay kr ky
Dil ko ankhon ka azadar kia hy hum nay


baei kya hi kehny... wahhh.... kya hi kehny....

tamaam ghazal pr dhairoN daad qubool kreN... Allah Taala aap ko is se bhi ziada ata kary,,, khush raheN aabad raheN....
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baei subhanAllah...... janab kamaal hi kr diya ... maza aa gya radeef ka bhi aur ghazal ka bhi.... chaa ga'ay ho serkaar....

Sham e gham ko tere yadon ky hawalay kr ky
Dil ko ankhon ka azadar kia hy hum nay


baei kya hi kehny... wahhh.... kya hi kehny....

tamaam ghazal pr dhairoN daad qubool kreN... Allah Taala aap ko is se bhi ziada ata kary,,, khush raheN aabad raheN....
aray sarkar itni muhabatain itna khaloos,,,,,hum khak nashin is kabil kahn
boht shukria sairon khoon barha hy ap ki hosla afzai say
khair andasih
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Mazhar bhai bht acchi likhi hai...zabardst humein bhi kuch guide kijye na..............kab aapki shagirdi milegi humko???????????
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Sham e gham ko tere yadon ky hawalay kr ky
Dil ko ankhon ka azadar kia hy hum nay
bohat khoob janab dher sari dad qabol kijiye
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Dhoop pachtati hy jab say dil e awara ko
Waqif e saya e dewar kia hay hum nay
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Old 06-12-2008, 07:56 PM
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Mazhar bhai bht acchi likhi hai...zabardst humein bhi kuch guide kijye na..............kab aapki shagirdi milegi humko???????????
aray behna.a
main to khud abhi shagird hun apnay ustad e muhtaram professor sadaf changezi shaib ka jo quetta main hotay hain albata ap ko mashwara zarur dun ga jahan zarurat ho hazir hun ap apni compositions discuss kr sakty hain, magr main masruf boht hota hun

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bohat khub................ ....
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Nok e naiza pe hi sar apna sajay ga mazhar``
Bay'at e shah say inkar kia hay hum nay

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Mazhar bhai kya kehne haiN ... Wah Wah ... Bohot hee umdah!
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