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Ik dil he, aik jaan he rakht e safar meraa

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Old 07-09-2006, 06:26 PM
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Ik dil he, aik jaan he rakht e safar meraa
Mayraa yeh kul jahaan he rakht e safar meraa.

Zanjeer ban ke paaoN se lipTii he yeh zameen
Aor us pe aasmaan he rakht e safar meraa.

Daryaa o dasht ab meray a,adaa,a ki saf maiN haiN
Goyaa ik imtehaan he rakht e safar meraa.

AankhoN se is cheraagh ka kuchh aisa rabt he
Manzil ka ik nishaan he rakht e safar meraa.

Rakkhay huay he aaj bhi apnay HiSaar maiN
Mairay liyay amaan he rakht e safar meraa.

Ashraf yaqeeN banaakay liyay phir rahaa hooN saath
Kiaa dilnasheeN gumaan he rakht e safar meraa.


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Dear Friends!
Here I am posting a new Ghazal for your study. Please give your comments. I shall be very very thankful to you on your comments.
God Bless you, Thanks & Allah Hafiz
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Buhat hi khoobsoorat Ashraf bhai.. buhat hi a'ala...

alfaz nahiN mil rahay heiN ta'areeef ko

Zanjeer ban ke paaoN se lipTii he yeh zameen
Aor us pe aasmaan he rakht e safar meraa.

kon kon sa shair quote karooN idher... wah sahab... buhat hi a'ala..
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Buhat hi khoobsoorat Ashraf bhai.. buhat hi a'ala...

alfaz nahiN mil rahay heiN ta'areeef ko

Zanjeer ban ke paaoN se lipTii he yeh zameen
Aor us pe aasmaan he rakht e safar meraa.

kon kon sa shair quote karooN idher... wah sahab... buhat hi a'ala..
Ail Lamha bhai! Aap ka bohat bohat shukria ke Hasb e sabiq yeh ghazal bhi aap ko pasand aai. Mairi khush naSibi he ke aap jaisay sukhan shanaas dost aor ehl e qalam mairi sha,ery ko saraahtay aor haoSla afzaai kartay haiN.
Khuda aap ko hamesha khush o khurram rakkhay.Aameen.
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Ail Lamha bhai! Aap ka bohat bohat shukria ke Hasb e sabiq yeh ghazal bhi aap ko pasand aai. Mairi khush naSibi he ke aap jaisay sukhan shanaas dost aor ehl e qalam mairi sha,ery ko saraahtay aor haoSla afzaai kartay haiN.
Khuda aap ko hamesha khush o khurram rakkhay.Aameen.

Ashraf bhai.... takalluf bartaraf... aap meray baray meiN kuch ziada hi mubalghay aur apnay baray meiN inkisaari se kaam lay rahay heiN... meiN na tou sukhan shinaas -o- sahib-i-qalam hooN aur na hi aap ki shayeri ko meary sarahnay ki zaroorat hay...

Sach kahooN tou aap ustadana rutbay walay shayer heiN... meiN nay aaap ko ustaad mana...

khush rahiye.. shayeri kertay rahiye.. aur kuch humko bhi sikha dijiye.. .
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Ashraf bhai.... takalluf bartaraf... aap meray baray meiN kuch ziada hi mubalghay aur apnay baray meiN inkisaari se kaam lay rahay heiN... meiN na tou sukhan shinaas -o- sahib-i-qalam hooN aur na hi aap ki shayeri ko meary sarahnay ki zaroorat hay...

Sach kahooN tou aap ustadana rutbay walay shayer heiN... meiN nay aaap ko ustaad mana...

khush rahiye.. shayeri kertay rahiye.. aur kuch humko bhi sikha dijiye.. .
Bhai! aap ki muhabbat! laikin maiN to khud abhi apnay aap ko she,ar o adab ka talib e ilm hi samajhta hooN. Bohattttt.....bohatt tt shukria bhai Aik lamha.
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bohat khooob ........kya kamal likhaa Ashraf sahab aap nay............

Zanjeer ban ke paaoN se lipTii he yeh zameen
Aor us pe aasmaan he rakht e safar meraa

Ashraf yaqeeN banaakay liyay phir rahaa hooN saath
Kiaa dilnasheeN gumaan he rakht e safar meraa.
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bohatttt khoobsurat ghazal kahi ashraf bhai hasb e mamool,,,,,,
khush rahein , likhtay rahein
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asslamo alikum wah Ashraf sahab kiya khub soorat ghazal likh daali hai aap ne is se anadaza hogaya hai k har acha shair khud
ko tifle maktab samjh kar kitna acha kse likh leta hai
aik aik sher ki apni aijk alag taseer hai samjh nahin arha kis kissher ki baat karoon wah maza agaya
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