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.-* .-*..Ik Aur Sitara Toot Chala..*-. *-.

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Old 09-29-2005, 07:56 PM
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aik choti si nazam mein tum nai bauhat gehri baat bayaan ki hai mehroo bauhat hi pyari nazam hai lekin mein tumhein yehi dua doongi kai mera ye tara kabhi na tootai

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Aik Aur Sitarah Toot Chala ....

mujhtasir per pur aser yara

khush raha kero chanda
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awwwwwwwwwwwww...... ...............bhuuu ut acha likha hai mehroo
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Asslam o Allaikum
Mehru ...main Hg pay aata tha kuch poetry parhta tha ...even log in bhi nahi hota tha ........
par....
aaap ki ye poem .................... .
is nay mujhay majboor kia k main log in ho k comments doon ..
it really really awsome ....
Kamal ka izhaar simple se words main..........
Really Marvolous........... .
Likhti rahiay .......
Khush rahiayyy
Allah aap ka hami o nasir ho
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Asslam-o-ALikum WRW b

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great great mehroo.it's too good.bohat hi acha likha hai.great.i am going to note it in my diary.zabardast.
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Beautifull na.

Let me compose it 1
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phir say kuch likh diya ........ab bhugtain ap sab

.-* .-* .-* ... Ik Aur Sitara Toot Chala ... *-. *-. *-.

kuch yad hai janaan ji tum ko?
tum mujh ko sitara kehtay thay...
aur toot'tay taaray ka manzar
tumhain kitna acha lagta tha..!
ab jabke haal kuch aisa hai
ke sath tumhara choot chala
lo khush ho jao janaan ji
ik aur sitara toot chala....

khush rahiye
tanqeed-o-aara ki muntazir
Mehroo
bohaaaaat khoobsurat janna ji magr apney liye aisey na likhna ye tara chamkta hi rahy ga hameysha /yhug

khush raho bohat sara @};-
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