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Ik Aam Sii Larkii...!!!

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Old 09-06-2007, 05:54 AM
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Ik Aam Sii Larkii...!!!

ik aam sii larkii!

apni haseen aankhon mein
kaanch sey nazuk khawab sajaye
unn ki tabeer k intizar mein
rehti hai
iss ehsaas sey bey khabar
k uss k yeh abeeno'N jaisay khawab
toot gaye to kya ho gha???
ussey sirf pachtana ho gha
ik masoom sii larkii!
apnay dil mein yeh aarzoo liye
hansti muskurati rehti hai k
uss k khawabo'N ki tabeer
jald ho ghi
lekin!
phir ussey pachtana hi parta hai
aoro'N k faisilo'N par sar jhukana hi parta hai
ik pagal sii larkii!
siwaye ronay aur aansoo bahanay k
aur kuch kar nahin paati
woh bey basi sey seb ko
dekhti reh jaati hai
sochti reh jaati hai
lekin taqdeer uss k khawab
kirchi kirchi kar deyti hai
ik buhadar sii larkii!
phir ibn e aadam k paao'N ki dhool ban-nay ko
tayaar milti hai
bint e hawa aaj sey nahin
sadiyo'N sey issi salook ki haq daar thehraii jaati hai
ibn e aadam k qadmo'N talay
bint e hawa k dil ki sarzameen paayi jaati hai
aye bint e hawa teri azmat ko salaam
yeh nazam sirf aur sirf teray naam...!!!

Written By: Nayaab Ali
aaj phir himmat kar k apni iss kavish k saath hazir huii hoon...yeh woh nazam hai jiss ney qalam sey aur shayrii ki duniya sey mera rishta jorra tha...yani meray haath sey likhii huii meri pehlii nazam...aap sab k comments ka intizar rahay gha...GOD bless u all alwayz...!!!
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Old 09-06-2007, 08:36 AM
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aapki pehli nazm paRh ker acha laga

keep writing n sharing with us ,will be waitin for the next .
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Ik Aam Sii Larkii...!!!


ik aam sii larkii!
apni haseen aankhon mein
kaanch sey nazuk khawab sajaye
unn ki tabeer k intizar mein
rehti hai
iss ehsaas sey bey khabar
k uss k yeh abeeno'N jaisay khawab
toot gaye to kya ho gha???
ussey sirf pachtana ho gha
ik masoom sii larkii!
apnay dil mein yeh aarzoo liye
hansti muskurati rehti hai k
uss k khawabo'N ki tabeer
jald ho ghi
lekin!
phir ussey pachtana hi parta hai
aoro'N k faisilo'N par sar jhukana hi parta hai
ik pagal sii larkii!
siwaye ronay aur aansoo bahanay k
aur kuch kar nahin paati
woh bey basi sey seb ko
dekhti reh jaati hai
sochti reh jaati hai
lekin taqdeer uss k khawab
kirchi kirchi kar deyti hai
ik buhadar sii larkii!
phir ibn e aadam k paao'N ki dhool ban-nay ko
tayaar milti hai
bint e hawa aaj sey nahin
sadiyo'N sey issi salook ki haq daar thehraii jaati hai
ibn e aadam k qadmo'N talay
bint e hawa k dil ki sarzameen paayi jaati hai
aye bint e hawa teri azmat ko salaam
yeh nazam sirf aur sirf teray naam...!!!

Written By: Nayaab Ali


aaj phir himmat kar k apni iss kavish k saath hazir huii hoon...yeh woh nazam hai jiss ney qalam sey aur shayrii ki duniya sey mera rishta jorra tha...yani meray haath sey likhii huii meri pehlii nazam...aap sab k comments ka intizar rahay gha...GOD bless u all alwayz...!!!
achi hai
lekon aziza jaisa ke mein sab ko mashwra deta houn ke nazm mukhtasir likheen aap nazm ko jitni tawalat deen gay aap ulaj jayeengay aur mouzoh pe aap ka control khatam ho jayeega ...
atif ki nazmeen parha kareen
aap ka
qamar
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very nice................ ..............
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bohat aacha likha
khush rahyee
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achhi koshish rahi yeh bhi sMiLiNg DoLL saaheba,...lekin jesa ke Qamar bhahi ne kaha,abhi aap koshish kiya kijiye ke nazam ko ziyaada tool na dain,aor nazam ke mozu ko saamaney rakhtey huye tasalsul,aor rawaani ki tarf tawajah dain,
mashq jaari rakhiye,INSHA ALLAH behtari aati jaaye gi kalaam main,
bahot khush rahiye,
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Bohat khoob.. bohat acha likha.. aur pehli kawish hai .. uss lehaz se to aur bhi acha hai .. likhti rahiye.. ke likhtay likhtay aur bhi nikhaar aaye ga.. mazeed ka yaqeenan intezar rahay ga.. ab tak ka Behad Shukria..

wafa aur dua ke saath
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achi kawish rahi ... magar maiN bhi Qamar bhai ki bat dohrana chahooNgi... nazm ko bayja tool dainay say uska husn jata rehta hai... is say bachaiN.. aur rawani par tawajja daiN..

khush rahiye
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