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This is a discussion on Ik Aam Sii Larkii...!!! within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Ik Aam Sii Larkii...!!! ik aam sii larkii! apni haseen aankhon mein kaanch sey nazuk khawab sajaye unn ki tabeer ...
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| Ik Aam Sii Larkii...!!! ik aam sii larkii! apni haseen aankhon mein kaanch sey nazuk khawab sajaye unn ki tabeer k intizar mein rehti hai iss ehsaas sey bey khabar k uss k yeh abeeno'N jaisay khawab toot gaye to kya ho gha??? ussey sirf pachtana ho gha ik masoom sii larkii! apnay dil mein yeh aarzoo liye hansti muskurati rehti hai k uss k khawabo'N ki tabeer jald ho ghi lekin! phir ussey pachtana hi parta hai aoro'N k faisilo'N par sar jhukana hi parta hai ik pagal sii larkii! siwaye ronay aur aansoo bahanay k aur kuch kar nahin paati woh bey basi sey seb ko dekhti reh jaati hai sochti reh jaati hai lekin taqdeer uss k khawab kirchi kirchi kar deyti hai ik buhadar sii larkii! phir ibn e aadam k paao'N ki dhool ban-nay ko tayaar milti hai bint e hawa aaj sey nahin sadiyo'N sey issi salook ki haq daar thehraii jaati hai ibn e aadam k qadmo'N talay bint e hawa k dil ki sarzameen paayi jaati hai aye bint e hawa teri azmat ko salaam yeh nazam sirf aur sirf teray naam...!!! Written By: Nayaab Ali aaj phir himmat kar k apni iss kavish k saath hazir huii hoon...yeh woh nazam hai jiss ney qalam sey aur shayrii ki duniya sey mera rishta jorra tha...yani meray haath sey likhii huii meri pehlii nazam...aap sab k comments ka intizar rahay gha...GOD bless u all alwayz...!!!
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#2
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| aapki pehli nazm paRh ker acha laga ![]() keep writing n sharing with us ,will be waitin for the next .
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#3
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lekon aziza jaisa ke mein sab ko mashwra deta houn ke nazm mukhtasir likheen aap nazm ko jitni tawalat deen gay aap ulaj jayeengay aur mouzoh pe aap ka control khatam ho jayeega ... atif ki nazmeen parha kareen aap ka qamar
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| very nice................ .............. |
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#5
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| bohat aacha likha khush rahyee
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#6
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| achhi koshish rahi yeh bhi sMiLiNg DoLL saaheba,...lekin jesa ke Qamar bhahi ne kaha,abhi aap koshish kiya kijiye ke nazam ko ziyaada tool na dain,aor nazam ke mozu ko saamaney rakhtey huye tasalsul,aor rawaani ki tarf tawajah dain, ![]() mashq jaari rakhiye,INSHA ALLAH behtari aati jaaye gi kalaam main, ![]() bahot khush rahiye, ![]()
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#7
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| Bohat khoob.. bohat acha likha.. aur pehli kawish hai .. uss lehaz se to aur bhi acha hai .. likhti rahiye.. ke likhtay likhtay aur bhi nikhaar aaye ga.. mazeed ka yaqeenan intezar rahay ga.. ab tak ka Behad Shukria.. ![]() wafa aur dua ke saath withlove ![]()
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#8
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| achi kawish rahi ... magar maiN bhi Qamar bhai ki bat dohrana chahooNgi... nazm ko bayja tool dainay say uska husn jata rehta hai... is say bachaiN.. aur rawani par tawajja daiN.. ![]() khush rahiye
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