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**maryamkhurram** · #1 07-09-2005, 12:05 AM

Ibteda say inteha tak

ibtida say inteha tak,
inteha say ibtida tak;
aasmano say zameeen tak,
aur
zameen say aasmaan tak ;
hay ek aawaaz ki goonj;
hay ek chehray ka aks;
hay ek khushboo basi hui----
hay ek gahri si nazar ka jadoo---
aur in nazroon ki gahraiyun may,
main khoye rehna chahti hoon;
subha say shaam tak ,
aur shaam say raat tak ;
dil ki pahli dharkan say-----
apni akhri saans tak-------!
This is sincerely for u khurram @};-
With lots of love

**withlove** · #2 07-09-2005, 05:07 AM

dil ki pahli dharkan say-----
apni akhri saans tak-------!

wahh wahhh... dil ki pehli dharkan se .. apni aakhri sans tak.. bohat khoob... dil ke mad-o-jazar ko.. bohat khoobsoorti se lafzo'n main qaid kiya aap ne.. iqrar-e-wafa ka bohat khoob andaz.. aur hamari janib se bohat si daad.. @};-

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove @};-

**:Qassim:** · #3 07-09-2005, 05:36 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by maryamkhurram

Ibteda say inteha tak

ibtida say inteha tak,
inteha say ibtida tak;
aasmano say zameeen tak,
aur
zameen say aasmaan tak ;
hay ek aawaaz ki goonj;
hay ek chehray ka aks;
hay ek khushboo basi hui----
hay ek gahri si nazar ka jadoo---
aur in nazroon ki gahraiyun may,
main khoye rehna chahti hoon;
subha say shaam tak ,
aur shaam say raat tak ;
dil ki pahli dharkan say-----
apni akhri saans tak-------!
This is sincerely for u khurram @};-
With lots of love

Salaam

Maryam jee, inteha'ee khoobsurat andaaz e bayaan hai aap ka /clap5

Qassim Mirza Ali :Qassim:

**ShAnIjee** · #4 07-09-2005, 08:20 AM

Salam

dil ki pahli dharkan say-----
apni akhri saans tak-------!

Khaloos aur muhabbat buhat khoobsorat

Dua ahi ye sab aisay he qaim rahay hamesha

Poets Club mein khush amdeed

Aisay he lihkti rahiyay aur share kerti rahiyay

Sada muskurati rahiyay

ShAnI @};-

**1 thka hova anso** · #5 07-09-2005, 06:00 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by maryamkhurram

Ibteda say inteha tak

ibtida say inteha tak,
inteha say ibtida tak;
aasmano say zameeen tak,
aur
zameen say aasmaan tak ;
hay ek aawaaz ki goonj;
hay ek chehray ka aks;
hay ek khushboo basi hui----
hay ek gahri si nazar ka jadoo---
aur in nazroon ki gahraiyun may,
main khoye rehna chahti hoon;
subha say shaam tak ,
aur shaam say raat tak ;
dil ki pahli dharkan say-----
apni akhri saans tak-------!
This is sincerely for u khurram @};-
With lots of love

/wah ji /wah maryam khurram kiya hi likhene hain ji ap k to /clap5
likhti hain ji

subha say shaam tak ,
aur shaam say raat tak ;
dil ki pahli dharkan say-----
apni akhri saans tak-------!

very nice maryam khurram ji /rose

/yhug
b happy

/AH

**nailahkb** · #6 01-28-2007, 08:35 AM

Bohat bohat khooob janab
Very very nice**********

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