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~*~Hum Bari Mehnat Sey Dard Kamaya Kertay Hain~*~

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Old 12-04-2005, 03:02 PM
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Meri eik taveel ghazal ke bohat say muntakhib ashaar!! @};-

kuch samajh nahin aarai
kin alfaz main tareef karoon
is ghazal nay to sach mujh per jadoo kar dia
taveel hoonay kay bawajood
sattar sattar intakhab hay
or umeed hay keh aap jesay
loogon kay sath rah kar
ham jesay nao aamoz bhi kuch seekh jain gay
with great love
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bohat bohat achi ghazal hei.balkay bohat hi achi hei.ap ki urdue to bohat hi achi hei.ghazab ki ghazal likhi.
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wahhhhhhhhh bhai kia khoon kamal hii tou likhtey ho,,,,,,beymisal likhtey ho3
kisi mustahiq ko do ab tum zindagii ki her duaa
bina terey to hum saansey zaaya kartey heyn
laa key mouqabil aaina-e-dil aksar hijr raatoon mein
terey dard key patharoon ko aazmayaa kartey heyn
wahhhh bhaii lajawab,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,khush rahnaa sadda,,,,,yunheyn sadda likhtey rahnaa3
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zindagi bhar ki wafayain jin k naam ker daleen
wo ik lamhay main hum ko tau paraya kertay hain

wo hamain chor giya tau hum per bhi ayaa'n hoa
kuch safeenay ser e sahil bhi doob jaya kertay hain


wah .. @};-
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Bohot hi khoob....

aik taweel ghuzul...jis main kum-o-besh saare hi zindagi ke fasane zere nuzur rehe

Bohot khoob Farrukh....khush rehiye...aur share kerte rehiye
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kia likhtay hain kamal kartay hain 3
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MusaFir...!Kiya Kahon ab...Taveel thi...or Dil chah raha tha ke or taavel ho..is sahar se nikalane ka munn he nahi kia...Leken kiya karain...ikhtitam hona tha...ab tu bus intizar hai...or kaLam ap ka kab ata hai @};-
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