Urdu Poetry Forum

**withlove** · #41 12-13-2005, 09:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ShAnIjee

Laut Aao aay daryay ishq k aik muddat say
Hum Kishti-e-jaan reet pay chalaya kertay hain

Day kay judai kehtay ho muskurao ab
Kabhi pyaron ko yun bhe azmaya kertay hian ?

Farrukh Bhai kamal kiya hamesha ke terhan

Buhat khush rahiayay

ShAnI @};-

Shani ji... aap ki pasendeedgi ka Behad Shukria.. @};-

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove @};-

**withlove** · #42 12-13-2005, 09:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Diya

taveel ghazal likhna kabhi asaan nahi hota magar aap janai kaisai ye kartai hain ...ghazal ka khayal bauhat hi umdah hai aur sehar wakai aisa baandha gaya kai dil chaha mazeed taveel hoti ye

bauhat hi umdah ghazal likhi hai farrukh

khush rahiyai

Diya ji.. aap si shaira ka iss darja sarahana.. mere liye ba-es-e-musarat-o-inbasaat hai.. Bohat Shukria.. @};-

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove @};-

**withlove** · #43 12-13-2005, 09:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Aaina

MashaAllah... aik aur taveel ghazal aur aik aik shair la'jawab... kisi aik shair ko pasandeeda kehna khasa dushwar ho gaya hai... bohot hi lutf ayaa apki yeh ghazal parh ker... likhte raheye......aur share karte raheye..

khush rheye....@};-

Ayesha ji.. mamnoon hon.. Bohat Shukria.. @};-

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove @};-

**withlove** · #44 12-13-2005, 10:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by GHAZAAL

Assalam-o-allakum withlove

Phir nikal partay hain hijr ki tapti dhoop main hum
Phir tayray gham kay Saa'y saya kertay hain....

wahhhh janab buhaat umdah main pehlay bhi keh chuki hon aur aik bar phir kehna chahti hoon kay mashallah aap ka Takhaull buhaat umdah hay aur alfaz ka zakhera bhi qabil-e-deed hay.tamam ashar khubsuraat hain aur waqi With Love likhay gay hain

.Khush rahein aur issi terhan piyari piyari ghazlein hum say share kertay rahein.

Regards,
Ghazal

Ghazal ji.. aap ka Behad Shukerguzar hon jo aap ne iss qabil jana.. bus aap ke likhay ko parhnay ki pyas bhi rehti hai .. ik nigah iss janib bhi.. aur aap ka nick bohat acha hai .. magar ye ghazaaal parha jata hai ... ghazal aur ghazaaal main to farak hota hai na.. ik nigah iss janib bhi .. Bohat Shukria.. @};-

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove @};-

**withlove** · #45 12-13-2005, 10:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by brokenheart90

hmmmmmmmmmmmmm Farukh bohut achi ghazal hai
bohut taweel honay k sath bohut zabardast bhi hai3
har lihaaz say hi umda ghazal hai
keep sharing
khush rahiay

Heart ji.. daad bakhshnay ka Bohatttt Shukria.. @};-

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove @};-

**withlove** · #46 12-13-2005, 10:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shokh

Kaash ilfaz hotay apki is gazal ki tarif karnay kay liye @};-

kash main bhi aap ki tarah eik satar main lajawab kernay ka fun janta hota.. nehayat mamnoon hon.. @};-

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove @};-

**withlove** · #47 12-13-2005, 10:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kanch ki mehroo

bohat khooob likha farrukh bhai..... har shair behtareeen.....@};-

khush rahiye

Mehreen ji.. pazeerai ka Behad Shukria.. @};-

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove @};-

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