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~*~Hum Bari Mehnat Sey Dard Kamaya Kertay Hain~*~

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Old 12-10-2005, 08:08 PM
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humesha ki tarha is baar bhi chaa gaya aap ka kalam bohat khoobsurat her her lafz nageene ki tarha jara hua mahsoos hota hai .. sada khush rahiye aur likhte rahiye
Strawberry ji... aap ne iss darja tareef ke liaq jana... aap ka Behad Shukria.. @};-

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hamesha ki terha...bohat khoob aur la jawab likha hai..........

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wah! buhat khoob janab kaya hi khoob likhi hai ghazal .. buhat sii daad qabool karain ,,,

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wah! buhat khoob janab kaya hi khoob likhi hai ghazal .. buhat sii daad qabool karain ,,,

buhat khush rahoo
Aftab ji.. mamnoon hon.. Bohat Shukria.. @};-

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Meri eik taveel ghazal ke bohat say muntakhib ashaar!! @};-


Adaab!

Mujhe hairaani nahi hoi jo itna acha intekhaab SOS mein share karta ho woh khud ghazal likhe ga to aysi hi likhe ga itni taweel ghazal aur itni rawani aur har sher hi eik se barh kar eik hai, mujhe yeh bohat pasand aye
Yaad rakhna hi chahat mein faqt mushkil nahi hota
Jigr waaley hain woh bhi jo bhoolaya kartey hain

Dey kar judaai kehtey ho ab jee key bhi dikhaao
Kabhi pyaaro.n ko yun bhi azmaya kartey hain

Utha utha key gham ka bojh raat raat bhar
Ham bari mehnat se dard kamaya kartey hain

Kehney ko eik baar hi toota tha aayna-e-dil leikin
Ham aaj bhi tukrey us key uthaya kartey hain

Bari mushkil sey yeh chand ashaar nikaaley hain kyun key poori ghazal hi la-jawab hai

Wa'salam
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