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Shokh · #21 12-07-2005, 02:42 PM

Kaash ilfaz hotay apki is gazal ki tarif karnay kay liye @};-

**kanch ki mehroo** · #22 12-07-2005, 07:01 PM

bohat khooob likha farrukh bhai..... har shair behtareeen.....@};-

khush rahiye

**withlove** · #23 12-07-2005, 07:32 PM

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Originally Posted by SAGARKHAN

wahhhhhhhhh bhai kia khoon kamal hii tou likhtey ho,,,,,,beymisal likhtey ho

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kisi mustahiq ko do ab tum zindagii ki her duaa
bina terey to hum saansey zaaya kartey heyn
laa key mouqabil aaina-e-dil aksar hijr raatoon mein
terey dard key patharoon ko aazmayaa kartey heyn
wahhhh bhaii lajawab,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,khush rahnaa sadda,,,,,yunheyn sadda likhtey rahnaa

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Sagar ji .. ye aap hi ki rehnumai aur khaloos ka nateeja hai jo aaj iss qabil hein.. aap ke pasendeedgi ka Behad Shukria.. @};-

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove @};-

**withlove** · #24 12-07-2005, 07:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tanzila

zindagi bhar ki wafayain jin k naam ker daleen
wo ik lamhay main hum ko tau paraya kertay hain

wo hamain chor giya tau hum per bhi ayaa'n hoa
kuch safeenay ser e sahil bhi doob jaya kertay hain

wah .. @};-

Tanzila ji.. aap ke mayar per poori utri.. Behad khushi huyee.. Bohat Shukria...@};-

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove @};-

**withlove** · #25 12-07-2005, 07:37 PM

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Originally Posted by Aas

Bohot hi khoob....

aik taweel ghuzul...jis main kum-o-besh saare hi zindagi ke fasane zere nuzur rehe

Bohot khoob Farrukh....khush rehiye...aur share kerte rehiye

Atif sahib.. iss qadar baghor ghazal ka mutala kernay aur sarahnay per .. aap ka Behad Shukerguzar hon.. Bohat Shukria.. @};-

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove @};-

**withlove** · #26 12-07-2005, 07:39 PM

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Originally Posted by Udas Sham

zabardast
kia likhtay hain kamal kartay hain

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Ali sahib.. pazeerai ka Behad Shukria.. @};-

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove @};-

**withlove** · #27 12-07-2005, 07:41 PM

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Originally Posted by naz

MusaFir...!Kiya Kahon ab...Taveel thi...or Dil chah raha tha ke or taavel ho..is sahar se nikalane ka munn he nahi kia...Leken kiya karain...ikhtitam hona tha...ab tu bus intizar hai...or kaLam ap ka kab ata hai @};-

wafa ji.. aap ne jo maqam aata kiya.. uska ehsan mand hon.. aur intehayee mashkoor hon ke aap ne waqt nikala aur taveel justajoo ko parkha.. aur saraha.. Bohat Shukria.. @};-

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove @};-

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