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Hosh khud dard hai, is se mujhay chHuTkara day

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Old 08-16-2008, 06:40 AM
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Hosh khud dard hai, is se mujhay chHuTkara day
Jo nikal paaye na, sar maiN wo mere sauda day

Bhool jata hooN maiN har baar khud apni soorat
Aye mere dost! tu aayeena mujhay dikhla day

Dard se bhar gaya daman, to hai khushioN ki hawas
Aik hi shakhs ko taqdeer bhala kia kia day

Dil ki tu aarzoo koyee na bhalay poori kar
Ab to bas dil ki tamanna hai, usay lauTa day

Aye Khuda! ya to mere shehr ko aadil kar day
Ya mujhay phir se bhaTaknay ko koyee sehra day

Umr guzri hai magar phir bhi samajh aa na saka
Kaash, jeenay ka hunar koyee mujhay samjha day

Shehr maiN aaj faqat dard ka hai qeht Saraab!
KioN na tu, dil ka ye payemana zara chHalka day
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Bohat he khoob Kalaam..........Boha t zabardust likha app nay
magar mujhay ye teen ashaar bohat he zayada pasand ayy!!!!

Dard se bhar gaya daman, to hai khushioN ki hawas
Aik hi shakhs ko taqdeer bhala kia kia day

Aye Khuda! ya to mere shehr ko aadil kar day
Ya mujhay phir se bhaTaknay ko koyee sehra day

Umr guzri hai magar phir bhi samajh aa na saka
Kaash, jeenay ka hunar koyee mujhay samjha day
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Bohat he khoob Kalaam..........Boha t zabardust likha app nay
magar mujhay ye teen ashaar bohat he zayada pasand ayy!!!!

Dard se bhar gaya daman, to hai khushioN ki hawas
Aik hi shakhs ko taqdeer bhala kia kia day

Aye Khuda! ya to mere shehr ko aadil kar day
Ya mujhay phir se bhaTaknay ko koyee sehra day

Umr guzri hai magar phir bhi samajh aa na saka
Kaash, jeenay ka hunar koyee mujhay samjha day
Bohot bohot shukria aap ka...........
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buhat umdha .................
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bahot khoob Saraab bhahi,achhi koshish rahi yeh bhi,so daad qabool kijiye,
aek chhota sa mashwara is yaqeen ke saath ke aap mind naheen karaiN ge,...........ghazal kehtey huye jald baazi se kaam na liya kijiye,yaqeen kijiye aap is se bahot ziyaada achha likh saktey haiN,aor likhtey haiN,lekin....agar jald baazi se kaam na laiN to,
bahot khush rahiye,aor likhtey rahiye,
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bohat khoob sarab sahab achi ghazal likhi ap ne koshish jari rakhye
apna khayal rakhyega
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Dil ki tu aarzoo koyee na bhalay poori kar
Ab to bas dil ki tamanna hai, usay lauTa day

very nice.
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buhat umdha .................
Bohot shukria Asif Bhai.....
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