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This is a discussion on Hosh khud dard hai, is se mujhay chHuTkara day within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Hosh khud dard hai, is se mujhay chHuTkara day Jo nikal paaye na, sar maiN wo mere sauda day Bhool ...
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| Hosh khud dard hai, is se mujhay chHuTkara day Jo nikal paaye na, sar maiN wo mere sauda day Bhool jata hooN maiN har baar khud apni soorat Aye mere dost! tu aayeena mujhay dikhla day Dard se bhar gaya daman, to hai khushioN ki hawas Aik hi shakhs ko taqdeer bhala kia kia day Dil ki tu aarzoo koyee na bhalay poori kar Ab to bas dil ki tamanna hai, usay lauTa day Aye Khuda! ya to mere shehr ko aadil kar day Ya mujhay phir se bhaTaknay ko koyee sehra day Umr guzri hai magar phir bhi samajh aa na saka Kaash, jeenay ka hunar koyee mujhay samjha day Shehr maiN aaj faqat dard ka hai qeht Saraab! KioN na tu, dil ka ye payemana zara chHalka day
__________________ ******************** ******************** **** Adaab teri bazm ke jeenay nahiN daitay DeewanoN ko jeenay ki tamanna to baRi hay (Qabil Ajmeri) Last edited by Saraabs; 08-17-2008 at 08:41 AM. |
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| Bohat he khoob Kalaam..........Boha t zabardust likha app nay ![]() magar mujhay ye teen ashaar bohat he zayada pasand ayy!!!! Dard se bhar gaya daman, to hai khushioN ki hawas Aik hi shakhs ko taqdeer bhala kia kia day Aye Khuda! ya to mere shehr ko aadil kar day Ya mujhay phir se bhaTaknay ko koyee sehra day Umr guzri hai magar phir bhi samajh aa na saka Kaash, jeenay ka hunar koyee mujhay samjha day
__________________ Ham apne is mizaj mei kisi k bhi na ho sake Kisi se ham mile nahi,Kisi se dil mila nahi.. |
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| buhat umdha .................
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| bahot khoob Saraab bhahi,achhi koshish rahi yeh bhi,so daad qabool kijiye, ![]() aek chhota sa mashwara is yaqeen ke saath ke aap mind naheen karaiN ge,...........ghazal kehtey huye jald baazi se kaam na liya kijiye,yaqeen kijiye aap is se bahot ziyaada achha likh saktey haiN,aor likhtey haiN,lekin....agar jald baazi se kaam na laiN to, ![]() bahot khush rahiye,aor likhtey rahiye, ![]()
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| bohat khoob sarab sahab achi ghazal likhi ap ne koshish jari rakhye apna khayal rakhyega |
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| Dil ki tu aarzoo koyee na bhalay poori kar Ab to bas dil ki tamanna hai, usay lauTa day very nice. |
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