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<!--QuoteBegin--perfectly_created+Ap ril 28 2003,08:06--><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0"><tr> <td>Quote (perfectly_created @ April 28 2003,08:06)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE"><!--QuoteEBegin--><font color='#000000'><b>K uch sokhee shakhon ko kat girana parta hai..
Maslaa jab aan para hoo shajar kee baqaa ka..

bohat umda basit! Yar bohat zabardast aur lajawaab! Iss sher mein bohat kuch pinhaaN hai ~ khuda aur bhi ziyada traqqiyaaN day ... Amin! x<!--emo&@};---><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/flower2.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='@};-'><!--endemo--> </b></font>[/b][/quote]
<font color='#000000'>Usme e Dear <!--emo&@};---><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/flower2.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='@};-'><!--endemo-->

Thank you yar na sirf pasand karnay ka balkay duaoon mein bhi yaad rakhnay ka.. <!--emo&/flowers--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/liebe85.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='/flowers'><!--endemo--></font>

<!--QuoteBegin--Basit+April 24 2003,16:00--><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0"><tr> <td>Quote (Basit @ April 24 2003,16:00)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE"><!--QuoteEBegin--><font color='#000000'>Laki n lagta hai iss ko mazeed bahter kia ja sakta haiLakiAsalam o Alaikum <!--emo&/flowers--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/liebe85.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='/flowers'><!--endemo-->

Pichlay dinoon aik dost nay aik tarhee misra diya aur ghazal likhnay ka boola.. tu jo ghazal likhi woh aap lougoon kay sath bhi share kar raha hoon... Islaah aur mufeed mashwaroon ka intazaar rahay ga.. <!--emo&@};---><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/flower2.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='@};-'><!--endemo-->

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<center>"Ho faqa kashi naam jahan sabar o razaa ka.."
Kaisay lay naam koee dastaar o qabaa ka..

Zuban bandi hukam hai ameer e shahar ka..
Daam ghutt gaya aaj xik faqeer ke sadaa ka..

Na'paaid hoay ahed e wafa, bik gaey aymaan..
Khawb howa khawb woh khusbo ka saaba ka..

Dashat mein basaa hon sarabon mein ghira hon..
Mohabbat ka silla yeah - hai paighaam hawa ka..

Kuch sokhee shakhon ko kat girana parta hai..
Maslaa jab aan para hoo shajar kee baqaa ka..</center>


W.salam
Basit</font>[/b][/quote]
<font color='#008080'><b>B ouht achee koshish ki aap nay bouht acha likha,lakin mahsoos hota hai iss ko mazeed bahtar kia ja sakta hai kasa?To be very honest iss ka pata nai... <!--emo&/thinking--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/conf36.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='/thinking'><!--endemo--> overall bouht acha concept aur Izhar hai..

&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;
ZubaaN bandi Hukam hai Ameer-e-Shahr ka
Dam Ghut Gaya &nbsp;aaj Ik faqeer Ki &nbsp;Sada &nbsp; &nbsp; Ka</b></font>

<font color='#810541'>Dashat mein basaa hon sarabon mein ghira hon..
Mohabbat ka silla yeah - hai paighaam hawa ka..


Salams Basit...

Bohat hi umdaa ghazal likhi hay aap nay....Beysakhta wah bohat khub kehnaa iss ghazal kay liye acha laga...bohat gehra aur jamey unwaan bayan kia gaya hay iss ghazal kay aik aik sher main...keep it up...keep sharing
hamesha khush rahain abaad rahain...
ALLAH BLESS U <!--emo&@};---><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/flower2.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='@};-'><!--endemo--></font>

<font color='#0000FF'><b>< i>Bohut khoob bhai &nbsp;<!--emo&/weldone--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/div211.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='/weldone'><!--endemo--> &nbsp;<!--emo&/weldone--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/div211.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='/weldone'><!--endemo--> &nbsp;<!--emo&/weldone--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/div211.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='/weldone'><!--endemo--> </i></b></font>

<font color='#0000cc'>sala am

i don't know what to day mein nai kafi arsai baad tumhaari koi ghazal parhi hai and u know what &nbsp;basit

<!--emo&@};---><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/flower2.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='@};-'><!--endemo--> bauhat hi &nbsp;achi hai............

i really liked it hope kai tum aur bhi post kartai raho gai aur janab aap sai baat kiyai huai bhi kafi din hogai agar time hoto msn par ain


take care
with love
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<!--QuoteBegin--Basit+April 24 2003,19:00--><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0"><tr> <td>Quote (Basit @ April 24 2003,19:00)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE"><!--QuoteEBegin-->[/b][/quote]
<font color='#0000FF'>basit bhai buhat achay

wasisy anila wala mashwara acha hai aap soch laian waqai doom muh jaia gi:p</font>

<!--QuoteBegin--Basit+April 24 2003,19:00--><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0"><tr> <td>Quote (Basit @ April 24 2003,19:00)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE"><!--QuoteEBegin--><font color='#000000'>Asal am o Alaikum <!--emo&/flowers--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/liebe85.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='/flowers'><!--endemo-->

Pichlay dinoon aik dost nay aik tarhee misra diya aur ghazal likhnay ka boola.. tu jo ghazal likhi woh aap lougoon kay sath bhi share kar raha hoon... Islaah aur mufeed mashwaroon ka intazaar rahay ga.. <!--emo&@};---><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/flower2.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='@};-'><!--endemo-->

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<center>"Ho faqa kashi naam jahan sabar o razaa ka.."
Kaisay lay naam koee dastaar o qabaa ka..

Zuban bandi hukam hai ameer e shahar ka..
Daam ghutt gaya aaj xik faqeer ke sadaa ka..

Na'paaid hoay ahed e wafa, bik gaey aymaan..
Khawb howa khawb woh khusbo ka saaba ka..

Dashat mein basaa hon sarabon mein ghira hon..
Mohabbat ka silla yeah - hai paighaam hawa ka..

Kuch sokhee shakhon ko kat girana parta hai..
Maslaa jab aan para hoo shajar kee baqaa ka..</center>


W.salam
Basit</font>[/b][/quote]
<font color='#0000cc'>Sala m Basit,

Mulk kay halat yaqenan posheda hain en shairoon main

Inqilabi shairi jari rakhyee Buhat achay wA wA</font>

<font color='#0000cc'>very nice <!--emo&/clap--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/div223.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='/clap'><!--endemo-->
keep it up &nbsp;<!--emo&@};---><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/flower2.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='@};-'><!--endemo--></font>

<font color='#cd2990'>Basi t i had to reply this one .... eis ka yeh wala shier

Kuch sokhee shakhon ko kat girana parta hai..
Maslaa jab aan para hoo shajar kee baqaa ka..

bohot hi zabardast hai .. bohot zada .. i really liked it ... poori ghazal bhi bohot <!--emo&/weldone--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/div211.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='/weldone'><!--endemo--> hai ... magar yeh akhri wala mehfil loot li <!--emo&/blush--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/wbyim08.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='/blush'><!--endemo--> ......</font>

<!--QuoteBegin--Basit+April 24 2003,19:00--><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0"><tr> <td>Quote (Basit @ April 24 2003,19:00)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE"><!--QuoteEBegin--><font color='#000000'>Asal am o Alaikum <!--emo&/flowers--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/liebe85.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='/flowers'><!--endemo-->

Pichlay dinoon aik dost nay aik tarhee misra diya aur ghazal likhnay ka boola.. tu jo ghazal likhi woh aap lougoon kay sath bhi share kar raha hoon... Islaah aur mufeed mashwaroon ka intazaar rahay ga.. <!--emo&@};---><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/flower2.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='@};-'><!--endemo-->

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<center>"Ho faqa kashi naam jahan sabar o razaa ka.."
Kaisay lay naam koee dastaar o qabaa ka..

Zuban bandi hukam hai ameer e shahar ka..
Daam ghutt gaya aaj xik faqeer ke sadaa ka..

Na'paaid hoay ahed e wafa, bik gaey aymaan..
Khawb howa khawb woh khusbo ka saaba ka..

Dashat mein basaa hon sarabon mein ghira hon..
Mohabbat ka silla yeah - hai paighaam hawa ka..

Kuch sokhee shakhon ko kat girana parta hai..
Maslaa jab aan para hoo shajar kee baqaa ka..</center>


W.salam
Basit</font>[/b][/quote]
<font color='#000080'><b>
&nbsp; Basit bhai..... Simply Great.... &nbsp; <!--emo&/weldone--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/div211.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='/weldone'><!--endemo--> </b> <!--emo&@};---><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/flower2.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='@};-'><!--endemo--> &nbsp;<!--emo&@};---><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/flower2.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='@};-'><!--endemo--></font>