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This is a discussion on Himmat within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Himmat Woh qahqahoN ki masti KahaaN gayee who hasti? Woh khwaaboN pay jaadu karnaa Aur yaqeeN main badlnaa Sabaa say ...
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| Himmat Woh qahqahoN ki masti KahaaN gayee who hasti? Woh khwaaboN pay jaadu karnaa Aur yaqeeN main badlnaa Sabaa say sur milaanaa To kabhi taaroN say gungunana Jab hosh nay aankh kholi Afqaar say ki macholi Ab tu bhi udaas kyuN hai Tanhai ka paas kyuN hai Maanaa shub nay ziNdgi pay teri Lagaai lambi pheri Magar raushni kay woh daanay Jiskay tujh main khzaanaiN Bo day is kaali raat kay seenay par ---------------------------
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#2
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kush raho bro (wave1) (wave1)
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#4
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| aoa acha likha n especially the last stanza khush rahey
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#6
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buhat khub buhat khush raho ![]()
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#8
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| Bohot khoob brijinder jee....aap ka likha bohot khoob hota hai....no doubt... Bus aik choti see guzarish hai....agar mind na keejiye to...agli baar jo bhi likhiye...please...u s main font ko itna sada na rehne deejiye....i mean,,,,parcel per bhi to packet ka bohot haath hota hai... Ummeed hai ke aap chota bhai samajh ker meri gustakhi burdaasht ker lain ge...maine kehna munasib samjha, kiyoon ke aap acha likhte hain... Khush rehiye... ![]() |
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#9
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| Aas,thanx for the suggestion but it has gone above my head.Will u plz be specfic?I shall be grateful. Brijinder"Sagar" |
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#10
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That's all....not much i am asking...just for your own work...which i guess is very nice...and should be honored ![]() |