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her taraf ju pheli hai bedili zamane ki

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Old 01-22-2008, 01:24 PM
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SALAM,aap logoun ki khidmat main aik taza ghazal pesh ker rahay hain hope pasand aygi kion k ju shakhs bhi muhabat ki rahoun pe safar kar raha hai ya kar chuka hai usey manzil pe pohanchne se pehle is zamane k dye gay kai muqam se guzarna parta hai.
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HER TAFAR JU PHELI HAI BEDILI ZAMANE KI
HUMNE YUNHI LIKH DALI EK GHAZAL ZAMANE KI

AAINA JU DEKHA TU PHR YAQEEN AYA HAI
KITNI TANHA REHGAI HUN BHEER MAIN ZAMANE KI

SUN K MERE HATHOUN KI HER LAKEER GUMSUM HAI
ASHKBAR HAIN ANKHEIN PYAR K ZAMANE KI

PEHLE HANSA KARTE THE AB HANSI NAHI AATI
KUCH ALAG NAHI BAS YEH BAT HAI ZAMANE KI

HER KISI K DAMAN PE RANJISHO K DHABBE HAIN
YEH INAITEIN TUM BHI DEKH LO ZAMANE KI

JAB BHI HUMSE MILTE HU,SURKH CHEHRE HUTE HAIN
DEKHTE HAIN HUM SARI HARKATEIN ZAMANE KI

AAJ SHOKH JAZBOUN NE DIL MAIN GUDGUDI KI THI
NAFRATEIN UBHAR AAIN PHR SE IS ZAMANE KI

HUMNE JU ZAFAR CHERI BAAT BEWAFAI KI
TUM KION SAR JHUKAY HU BAT THI ZAMANE KI
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wa.alaikum-as-salam,

Maria sahiba ye ghazal bhi takhayul k hawaly se khoob rahi... aur ye dekh kr khushi hui k sabhi sheiroN ki rwani khoob hy... mager ghazal k do bunyadi components meiN se aik ki kami rhi... radeef "zamany ki" to her sheir meiN hy mager qaafia kisi shier meiN nazer nai aaya... so is taraf tawaju ki zuroorat hy.. likhti raheN aur ham se share krti raheN, khush raheN abad raheN....
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Maria ghazal khub hai aur 2nd shair bohat undah hai................d aad kabool kero aur bohat khush raho. Amin
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app ki ik umdha kawash rahi ishi tara laktay hain aur app ki jo kami hi pori hi jay gi
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PEHLE HANSA KARTE THE AB HANSI NAHI AATI
KUCH ALAG NAHI BAS YEH BAT HAI ZAMANE KI
wahh...bohat khoob likhti raho khush raho..
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walikum asalam...

umda khayalat rahay aapke... magar maiN bhi Faizan ki bat say itifaq karti hooN... mashq jari rakhiye..

khush rahiye
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Wsalam
shukria ghazal ko pasand karne k lye aur kafiye ka khayal bhi karenge InshAllah ainda aplogoun k mashware ka shukriya
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