It seems that you are unregistered. Please register with us by clicking Here, or if you are already registered login here
User Name: Password:
Connect
Urdu Poetry/Shayari Forum

Urdu Poetry Forum

Welcome to Urdu Community & Poetry/Shayari Forum

 


Her roz jo shabnum ke qatre pattiyoun se girraya karte hain

This is a discussion on Her roz jo shabnum ke qatre pattiyoun se girraya karte hain within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; ...

Go Back   Urdu Poetry/Shayari Forum > Urdu Poetry > Urdu Poet Club

Reload this Page Her roz jo shabnum ke qatre pattiyoun se girraya karte hain

Connect

Video Photo Books Games Register Groups FAQ Calendar Mark Forums Read Chat [1]
Notices

Latest Topics @ Urdu Poetry Forum

Cooking Contest JAN09

Names of Allah (wallpapers)

Designer Workshop

Islamic Wallpapers (JAN 2009)

Funny Video Contest (JAN09)

Poet of the month (GULZAR)

Jokes Contest (JAN09)

Best Designer Contest (JAN09)

Islamic Quotes (JAN09)

Best Writer WINNER (DEC08)

Poetry Topics  NayaSaal Dua

Gaza Crisis - Are you Awake - Share your views!

Rate This Thread - Her roz jo shabnum ke qatre pattiyoun se girraya karte hain.
(0)
Thread Rating: 0 votes, average.

Reply
Page 1 of 2 1 2 >
 
LinkBack Thread Tools
  #1  
Old 06-17-2007, 06:49 PM
faypal's Avatar
Senior Member
  
Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 656

Country:

Tutorials: 0

Thanks: 0
Thanked 19 Times in 16 Posts
Nominated 0 Times in 0 Posts
TOTW/F/M Award(s): 0
Rep Power: 88
faypal will become famous soon enoughfaypal will become famous soon enough
Awards Showcase
Poet of the Month 
Total Awards: 1
Arrow Her roz jo shabnum ke qatre pattiyoun se girraya karte hain
permalink
__________________
Afzal Chaudhry
+92-314-5486159
Last edited by faypal; 08-12-2007 at 02:36 PM..
SocialTwist Tell-a-Friend
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Submit to Yahoo!Submit to Google!Submit to Live!Submit to Facebook!Submit to Ask!Submit to StumbleUpon!Submit to Squidoo Submit to Netscape Submit to SlashDot Submit to Reddit Submit to FarkSubmit to Newsvine
Reply With Quote
  #2  
Old 06-17-2007, 09:18 PM
SAGARKHAN's Avatar
HG Club
  
Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: SHAHER-E-KHAYAL
Age: 31
Posts: 7,214

Country:

Tutorials: 0

Thanks: 0
Thanked 7 Times in 7 Posts
Nominated 0 Times in 0 Posts
TOTW/F/M Award(s): 0
Rep Power: 1178
SAGARKHAN has a reputation beyond reputeSAGARKHAN has a reputation beyond reputeSAGARKHAN has a reputation beyond reputeSAGARKHAN has a reputation beyond reputeSAGARKHAN has a reputation beyond reputeSAGARKHAN has a reputation beyond reputeSAGARKHAN has a reputation beyond reputeSAGARKHAN has a reputation beyond reputeSAGARKHAN has a reputation beyond reputeSAGARKHAN has a reputation beyond reputeSAGARKHAN has a reputation beyond repute
Default Re: Her roz jo shabnum ke qatre pattiyoun se girraya karte hain
permalink
Achii Ghazal Kahii Aap Neyn Afzal Bhai Khush Raheyey Sadda=d>
__________________
Signature Removed - Image exceeds 650 px by 350 px
SocialTwist Tell-a-Friend
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Submit to Yahoo!Submit to Google!Submit to Live!Submit to Facebook!Submit to Ask!Submit to StumbleUpon!Submit to Squidoo Submit to Netscape Submit to SlashDot Submit to Reddit Submit to FarkSubmit to Newsvine
Reply With Quote
  #3  
Old 06-17-2007, 10:28 PM
Haya n's Avatar
Cloz_Book
  
Join Date: Dec 2004
Location: Spain
Posts: 53,763

Country:

Tutorials: 0

My Mood:
Thanks: 1,087
Thanked 1,080 Times in 807 Posts
Nominated 0 Times in 0 Posts
TOTW/F/M Award(s): 0
Rep Power: 6879
Haya n has a reputation beyond reputeHaya n has a reputation beyond reputeHaya n has a reputation beyond reputeHaya n has a reputation beyond reputeHaya n has a reputation beyond reputeHaya n has a reputation beyond reputeHaya n has a reputation beyond reputeHaya n has a reputation beyond reputeHaya n has a reputation beyond reputeHaya n has a reputation beyond reputeHaya n has a reputation beyond repute
Awards Showcase
Best Cook Award Writer of the Month Writer of the Month Poet of the Month 
Total Awards: 4
Default Re: Her roz jo shabnum ke qatre pattiyoun se girraya karte hain
permalink
Aap Ki Ghazal Ka Pehla Shair Parhtay Hi Bay'Sakhta Yeh Ghazal Gunguna Uthi...
'' Kab Maira Nashaiman Aehl-e-Chaman Gulshan Mai'n Gawara Kartay Hai'n ''
Mujhay Aap Ki Yeh Ghazal Apnay Tamaam Shairo'n Samait Bouhat Pasand Aai...Masha Allah Aap Khoob Likhtay Hai'n...Bouhat Daad Qubool Kijiye...
__________________



SocialTwist Tell-a-Friend
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Submit to Yahoo!Submit to Google!Submit to Live!Submit to Facebook!Submit to Ask!Submit to StumbleUpon!Submit to Squidoo Submit to Netscape Submit to SlashDot Submit to Reddit Submit to FarkSubmit to Newsvine
Reply With Quote
  #4  
Old 06-18-2007, 06:16 AM
faypal's Avatar
Senior Member
  
Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 656

Country:

Tutorials: 0

Thanks: 0
Thanked 19 Times in 16 Posts
Nominated 0 Times in 0 Posts
TOTW/F/M Award(s): 0
Rep Power: 88
faypal will become famous soon enoughfaypal will become famous soon enough
Awards Showcase
Poet of the Month 
Total Awards: 1
Default Re: Her roz jo shabnum ke qatre pattiyoun se girraya karte hain
permalink
Quote:
Originally Posted by SAGARKHAN View Post
Achii Ghazal Kahii Aap Neyn Afzal Bhai Khush Raheyey Sadda=d>
Saghar bhai.........thanks for this appreciation.God bless you.
SocialTwist Tell-a-Friend
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Submit to Yahoo!Submit to Google!Submit to Live!Submit to Facebook!Submit to Ask!Submit to StumbleUpon!Submit to Squidoo Submit to Netscape Submit to SlashDot Submit to Reddit Submit to FarkSubmit to Newsvine
Reply With Quote
  #5  
Old 06-18-2007, 06:19 AM
faypal's Avatar
Senior Member
  
Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 656

Country:

Tutorials: 0

Thanks: 0
Thanked 19 Times in 16 Posts
Nominated 0 Times in 0 Posts
TOTW/F/M Award(s): 0
Rep Power: 88
faypal will become famous soon enoughfaypal will become famous soon enough
Awards Showcase
Poet of the Month 
Total Awards: 1
Default Re: Her roz jo shabnum ke qatre pattiyoun se girraya karte hain
permalink
Quote:
Originally Posted by Haya n View Post
Aap Ki Ghazal Ka Pehla Shair Parhtay Hi Bay'Sakhta Yeh Ghazal Gunguna Uthi...
'' Kab Maira Nashaiman Aehl-e-Chaman Gulshan Mai'n Gawara Kartay Hai'n ''
Mujhay Aap Ki Yeh Ghazal Apnay Tamaam Shairo'n Samait Bouhat Pasand Aai...Masha Allah Aap Khoob Likhtay Hai'n...Bouhat Daad Qubool Kijiye...

Esteemed haya n.........Thanks for this patronage.Allah pak aap ko khush rakhe.
SocialTwist Tell-a-Friend
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Submit to Yahoo!Submit to Google!Submit to Live!Submit to Facebook!Submit to Ask!Submit to StumbleUpon!Submit to Squidoo Submit to Netscape Submit to SlashDot Submit to Reddit Submit to FarkSubmit to Newsvine
Reply With Quote
  #6  
Old 06-18-2007, 10:40 AM
kanwal Hussain's Avatar
Bershigaal
  
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: Seil-E-Dard
Posts: 2,634

Country:

Tutorials: 0

My Mood:
Thanks: 23
Thanked 78 Times in 69 Posts
Nominated 0 Times in 0 Posts
TOTW/F/M Award(s): 0
Rep Power: 3113
kanwal Hussain has a reputation beyond reputekanwal Hussain has a reputation beyond reputekanwal Hussain has a reputation beyond reputekanwal Hussain has a reputation beyond reputekanwal Hussain has a reputation beyond reputekanwal Hussain has a reputation beyond reputekanwal Hussain has a reputation beyond reputekanwal Hussain has a reputation beyond reputekanwal Hussain has a reputation beyond reputekanwal Hussain has a reputation beyond reputekanwal Hussain has a reputation beyond repute
Awards Showcase
Poet of the Month Poet of the Month Writer of the Month Poet of the Month 
Total Awards: 11
Default Re: Her roz jo shabnum ke qatre pattiyoun se girraya karte hain
permalink
Ub ghutta to ho ga dum us ka us shehr ki bund dewaroun main

Hum aaj bhi pair ki chawoun main jissay pas bithaya karte hain
wahhh ...kia kehnay janb hr shair aik se berh kr aik hai...likhtay rahain khush rahain aabad rahain...@};-
__________________

Ab os k baad laga DiL to DiL lagi hogi
Hum os pe apni mohabt tamaam kr aaye...!
SocialTwist Tell-a-Friend
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Submit to Yahoo!Submit to Google!Submit to Live!Submit to Facebook!Submit to Ask!Submit to StumbleUpon!Submit to Squidoo Submit to Netscape Submit to SlashDot Submit to Reddit Submit to FarkSubmit to Newsvine
Reply With Quote
  #7  
Old 06-18-2007, 10:41 AM
WanderingThoughts's Avatar
KhaKastar~e~parwana
  
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Islamabad
Posts: 7,402

Country:

Tutorials: 0

My Mood:
Thanks: 1,764
Thanked 784 Times in 564 Posts
Nominated 25 Times in 13 Posts
TOTW/F/M Award(s): 0
Rep Power: 1841
WanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond repute
Awards Showcase
Poet of the Month 
Total Awards: 1
Default Re: Her roz jo shabnum ke qatre pattiyoun se girraya karte hain
permalink
Quote:
Originally Posted by faypal View Post
Her roz jo shubnum ke qatre pattiyoun se girraya karte hain
Yeh jhounkay tayri khushboo ko phooloun main chuppaya karte hain

Main ruqse chamun main dair gaay tuk khoya khoya rehta houn
Zub jhounke lipput ker shakhoun se tayre geet sunaya karte hain

Ub ghutta to ho ga dum us ka us shehr ki bund dewaroun main
Hum aaj bhi pair ki chawoun main jissay pas bithaya karte hain

Her mor pe pather kha kha ker mayre lub pe jo hunsi aati hai
Tayre shehr ke laugoun ko janahn hum payar sikhaya karte hain

Humain jub bhi kaheen se milti hai tasweer moquddus laugoun ki
Hum us ko dabo ker aankhoun main usse dil peh luggaya karte hain

Mayre payar ki batain purh purh ker ub neend unhain kyun aati nahin
Auraaq kissi ki chahut ke hum jin se purhaya karte hain

Mujhay kitna shouq tha janay wafa tayre gher ko roshun rukhne ka
Jis deep main laikun tail na ho usse juld bujhaya karte hain

Hain gehre raaz faqiroun ke in se koi naraaz na ho
Yeh le ke duaain kasay main her der khutkaya karte hain

Yehi soch ke laut gaya houn main us shehr main Afzal jana kaya
Jis shehr ke laug faqiroun se youn jaan churraya karte hain
Her mor pe pather kha kha ker mayre lub pe hunsi jo aati hai
Tayre shehr ke laugoun ko janahn hum payar sikhaya karte hain

Yehi soch ke laut gaya houn main us shehr main Afzal jana kaya
Jis shehr ke laug faqiroun se youn jaan churraya karte hain

bohat khoob Afzal Sahab aik aur umda ghazal paRhny ko mili aap ki janib se... ye do sher bohat hi achy lagy, pehly sher meiN do lafzoN ki tarteeb badalny ki jasarat ki hy, umed hy garaN na guzry gi... itni achi gahzal kehny pr dheroN daad qubool kreN...

Hain gehre raaz faqiroun ke in se koi naraaz na ho
Yeh le ke duaain kasay main her der khutkaya karte hain

is oper waly sher meiN aap ne qafia istamal kiya hy "khutkaya", jahaN tak mujhy malum hy ye lafz "khatkaya" nahi "khat-khataya" hota hy... so munasib samjheN to is sher ko thek kr leN...

likhty raheN, aur ham se share krty raheN,
Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziada ata kary,
khush raheN, aabad raheN...
__________________


akaily pan ki aziat ka ab gila kesa...
SocialTwist Tell-a-Friend
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Submit to Yahoo!Submit to Google!Submit to Live!Submit to Facebook!Submit to Ask!Submit to StumbleUpon!Submit to Squidoo Submit to Netscape Submit to SlashDot Submit to Reddit Submit to FarkSubmit to Newsvine
Reply With Quote
  #8  
Old 06-18-2007, 01:53 PM
foqiazafar's Avatar
Senior Member
  
Join Date: Dec 2006
Location: *~* Lahore *~*
Posts: 22,316

Country:

Tutorials: 0

My Mood:
Thanks: 0
Thanked 22 Times in 19 Posts
Nominated 0 Times in 0 Posts
TOTW/F/M Award(s): 0
Rep Power: 970
foqiazafar has a reputation beyond reputefoqiazafar has a reputation beyond reputefoqiazafar has a reputation beyond reputefoqiazafar has a reputation beyond reputefoqiazafar has a reputation beyond reputefoqiazafar has a reputation beyond reputefoqiazafar has a reputation beyond reputefoqiazafar has a reputation beyond reputefoqiazafar has a reputation beyond reputefoqiazafar has a reputation beyond reputefoqiazafar has a reputation beyond repute
Default Re: Her roz jo shabnum ke qatre pattiyoun se girraya karte hain
permalink
bohat khub
__________________
Signature Removed - Image exceeds 650 px by 350 px
SocialTwist Tell-a-Friend
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.us