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This is a discussion on han kabhi hasrat say.......... within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; aoa..es dafa kafi gap k baad likha ha kuch ore kuch kami si lug rahi ha complete hounay k baad ...
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#1
05-30-2007, 10:48 AM
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aoa..es dafa kafi gap k baad likha ha kuch ore kuch kami si lug rahi ha complete hounay k baad b issnazam main pr yeh sab ap batain gay k kaisi ha kya kami ha so mai wait keru gi ap sabki tarref or tanqeed ka zaroor bataiya ga kaisi lagi 1.gif ")1") ore meray systm mai i think koi prb ha so mai fonts ko bold nahi ker saki .na colur day saki ...HAN KABHI......... Kabhi hasrat kabi aas say Kabhi seerab kabi pias say Kabhi sahil kabhi mojh say Kabhi ajnabi kabhi habeeb say Kabhi aina kabhi seep say Kabhi chaon kabhi dhoop say Kabhi guman kabhi yaqen say Kabhi ansu kabhi muskan say Kabhi bebas kabhi nadan say Kabhi anjan kabhi mehrban say Kabhi hijar kabhi vesaal say Kabhi arzu kabhi malaal say kabhi bahar kabhi weeran say Kabhi door tak musaftain Kabhi pal pal sath say Kabhi lamha lamha rooh mai dahltay Kabhi asman per ubhertay chand say kabhi hasil kabhi lahsil say .... Suno ……. mughay tum zindagi say kion lagtay ho ?…..
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#2
05-30-2007, 11:01 AM
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Salam, Bohat khoob janab, nazm ko end dainay kay liye acchi tamheed bandhi app nay, lutf aaya parh kay Raza
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#4
05-30-2007, 11:42 AM
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wah shazlay jiii boht khooob nazam kahi ap nay alfaz aur phir alfaz ka muqabila b khoob hai boht lutf aya pad kar buss kahin kahin rawani tooti hein sada khush rahein "HG PuNj@bI@Nzz"
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#5
05-30-2007, 03:40 PM
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thnxxxx a lot mohsin sb k apko achi lagi nazam ore kahan say kami lagi ha mughay bataya kion k mughay b kuch lug to rahi ha per samgh nahi arahi kaha say ?ap lead keray gay to acha lagay ga,,once again tnx alot |
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#6
05-30-2007, 04:11 PM
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nice sharing jee................. ...>-v |
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#8
05-30-2007, 05:53 PM
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Wah Bohat Umdah Shazlay.......>d< |
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#9
05-30-2007, 08:03 PM
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waqaei aap ne kafi arse bad kuch share kiya hamary sath, aur ab to Has'san bhai ki bhi koi takhleeq paRhy mud'dat ho gai hy... laap ki nazm achi hy... kabhi ki takraar bhi khoob hy... aur her do jazbat ka tazaad bhi khoob pesh kiya ap ne.... lekin abhi in satroN meiN rawani ki kami mehsos ho rahi hy, aur nazm ka unwaan bhi tawaju chahta hy... overall aik achi nazm pesh krny pr daad hazir hy, qubool kreN.... Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziadaa ata kary, khush raheN, aabad raheN....
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