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**shazlay** · #21 06-02-2007, 10:02 AM

foqia apko nazam pasand ayi iss k leya m reallyy thnkfull of u

best wishes..

**shazlay** · #22 06-02-2007, 10:10 AM

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Originally Posted by WanderingThoughts

ji Shazlay sahiba is nazm meiN as such koi khaami nahi hy, sirf majmoi tor pr aik rhythm hota hy nazm ka, wo nahi mila is nazm meiN.....

ary ji ap ki apni nam hy, jab chaheN, jo chaheN change kr deN... ham kon hoty haiN aap ko rokny waly,....

aur aik week ka arsa toRha arsa nahi hota??? hamhaiN to her roz un ki kawish ka intzar rehta hy....

khair, Allah Mola aap ko boaht ziada ata kary,
khush raheN, aabad raheN....

thnx faizan bhai lead kernay ka ore ap say ek opinion chahu gi k agar nazam k end per jaisay k ha
suno ,,,,mughay tum zindagi say kion lagtay ho ?mai nay gour keya to iss ki wajah say mughay rawani mai thori kami mahsoos hoi agar yeh uh ho..
suno janay jana...
mughay lagtay ho bas tum zindagi say ,,,
to apka kya khial ha k nazam ki rawani ore rythm per koi asar peray ga?waisay to jo tha bas likh diya magar mai thori improvmnt chahu gi ap ki raya ka intzar rahay ga

FEEAMANALLAH

**nailahkb** · #23 06-04-2007, 09:14 AM

wah wah

shazlay bohat kaml ki nazam likhi hai app nay bohat bohat chha laga hai

**bailamos_** · #24 06-04-2007, 11:56 AM

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Originally Posted by shazlay

aoa..es dafa kafi gap k baad likha ha kuch ore kuch kami si lug rahi ha complete hounay k baad b issnazam main pr yeh sab ap batain gay k kaisi ha kya kami ha so mai wait keru gi ap sabki tarref or tanqeed ka zaroor bataiya ga kaisi lagi

ore meray systm mai i think koi prb ha so mai fonts ko bold nahi ker saki .na colur day saki ...

HAN KABHI.........

Kabhi hasrat kabi aas say
Kabhi seerab kabi pias say
Kabhi sahil kabhi mojh say
Kabhi ajnabi kabhi habeeb say
Kabhi aina kabhi seep say
Kabhi chaon kabhi dhoop say
Kabhi guman kabhi yaqen say
Kabhi ansu kabhi muskan say
Kabhi bebas kabhi nadan say
Kabhi anjan kabhi mehrban say
Kabhi hijar kabhi vesaal say
Kabhi arzu kabhi malaal say
kabhi bahar kabhi weeran say
Kabhi door tak musaftain
Kabhi pal pal sath say
Kabhi lamha lamha rooh mai dahltay
Kabhi asman per ubhertay chand say
kabhi hasil kabhi lahsil say ....
Suno ��.
mughay tum zindagi say kion lagtay ho ?�..

Khoobsurat khayalat per mabnii ek pyarii si nazm likhne per dher saarii daad qabool farmaiyye (flower4u) .... keep writing n sharing shazlay jii

HASDE WASDE RAWO

**shazlay** · #25 06-04-2007, 05:11 PM

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Originally Posted by nailahkb

wah wah

shazlay bohat kaml ki nazam likhi hai app nay bohat bohat chha laga hai

thnx a lot naila nazam apko pasand ayi buhat acha laga mughay

best wishes dear

**shazlay** · #26 06-04-2007, 05:15 PM

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Originally Posted by bailamos_

Khoobsurat khayalat per mabnii ek pyarii si nazm likhne per dher saarii daad qabool farmaiyye (flower4u) .... keep writing n sharing shazlay jii

HASDE WASDE RAWO

thnx a lot g apka name to mughay nahi pata i think k ameer ha ? apki poetry mai read keya ha ore apko nazam pasand ayi meray leya buhat khushi ki bat ha

best wishes

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