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**asif shahzad** · #11 05-31-2007, 05:45 AM

nice................ .......

**shazlay** · #12 05-31-2007, 09:40 AM

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Originally Posted by WanderingThoughts

wa-alaikum-as-salam Shazlay Sahiba!

waqaei aap ne kafi arse bad kuch share kiya hamary sath, aur ab to Has'san bhai ki bhi koi takhleeq paRhy mud'dat ho gai hy...

laap ki nazm achi hy... kabhi ki takraar bhi khoob hy... aur her do jazbat ka tazaad bhi khoob pesh kiya ap ne.... lekin abhi in satroN meiN rawani ki kami mehsos ho rahi hy, aur nazm ka unwaan bhi tawaju chahta hy...

overall aik achi nazm pesh krny pr daad hazir hy, qubool kreN....

Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziadaa ata kary,
khush raheN, aabad raheN....

thnx a lot faizan bhai apko meri kavish pasand ayi ore kuch kami to mughay b mahsoos hoi per samgh nahi ayi kaha per agar ap highlight kertay to mughay help milti ore kya mai unwan change ker sakti hoo abh ?abh gorh keya mai nay to mughay b feel huwa ha kuch ....
ore hassan sb nay to abhi last week hi kuch waqfay say apni 2 gazal post ki han shaid apki nazron say nahi guzri waisay woh iss terf buhat kam atay ha per inshallah ap jald hi un ki nayi kavish perhay gay

once again thnx alot ..
best wishes

**shazlay** · #13 05-31-2007, 09:43 AM

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Originally Posted by rida jabeen

bohut arsay bad kuch naya post kiya aap ne shazlay
lekin achhi nazam kahi aap ne ab ki baar
aap ne khassi taveel nazam kahi magar acha laga parh kar daad
qubool kijye

aoa rida
thnx a lot rida k apko meri kavish achi lagi han kafi arsa baad kuch post keya per mai khud post ker k b satisfy nahi hoi k kuch rahta ha per apko achi lagi mughay buhat khushi hoi nazam taqeel bas houti gayi

ore aj kel ap b gaib han kuch share keray na mughay intzar rahay ga..

**shazlay** · #14 05-31-2007, 09:46 AM

swera n asif bhai nazam ko pasand kernay ka buhatttttt shukriya

best wishes

**WanderingThoughts** · #15 05-31-2007, 11:42 AM

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Originally Posted by shazlay

thnx a lot faizan bhai apko meri kavish pasand ayi ore kuch kami to mughay b mahsoos hoi per samgh nahi ayi kaha per agar ap highlight kertay to mughay help milti ore kya mai unwan change ker sakti hoo abh ?abh gorh keya mai nay to mughay b feel huwa ha kuch ....
ore hassan sb nay to abhi last week hi kuch waqfay say apni 2 gazal post ki han shaid apki nazron say nahi guzri waisay woh iss terf buhat kam atay ha per inshallah ap jald hi un ki nayi kavish perhay gay

once again thnx alot ..
best wishes

ji Shazlay sahiba is nazm meiN as such koi khaami nahi hy, sirf majmoi tor pr aik rhythm hota hy nazm ka, wo nahi mila is nazm meiN.....

ary ji ap ki apni nam hy, jab chaheN, jo chaheN change kr deN... ham kon hoty haiN aap ko rokny waly,....

aur aik week ka arsa toRha arsa nahi hota??? hamhaiN to her roz un ki kawish ka intzar rehta hy....

khair, Allah Mola aap ko boaht ziada ata kary,
khush raheN, aabad raheN....

**ArAbIaN gIrL** · #16 05-31-2007, 11:44 AM

meine 1st tym read ki hai
lakin bohat hi achi hai
jaisa k WT ne kaha rawani mein kami hia
overol bohat achi feelingz hain

**shazlay** · #17 05-31-2007, 08:11 PM

thnx alot ab girl apko nazam pasand ayi bas kafi din baad likha to rawani mai kami rahi woh bat nahi ban saki but pasand kernay ka shukriya

bestwishes

**foqiazafar** · #18 06-01-2007, 09:45 AM

very nice

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han kabhi hasrat say..........

han kabhi hasrat say..........