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hamri jindagi ki pehli koshish

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Old 01-29-2005, 03:24 PM
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mujhay shairi ki alif bay bhi nahi aati aur naahi itna shauq hai lekin kal bethay bethay kuch bananayki koshish ki aur aik shair hi bana sakay,ab pata nahi is ko shair bhi keh saktay hain k nahi ye to aap ustaad log hi bata saktay ho


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teray ''KUN'' kehnay ki dair thi ''FAYAKOON'' pal bhar me ho gaya
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sab sey pehley tu HG pe khush amdeed

dosrey ye yaqeen nahi aata k aap ko shairi sey shagaf nahi.... kamal ka sher share kiya hay aap nay janab .. beintaha khoobsurat

khush raheye likhte raheye k bohat aacha likh saktey hain aap
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hai zindagi sey nibah mumkin!!!!
Main zindagi sey nibha rahi hoon

Hai us nay pocha udaas ho tum!
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wonderful....khayalo n ko alfaaz mein baandne ke liye sirf thori
koshish ki zaroorat hoti hai....likte rahiye, share karte rahiye...

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/welcome1 to HG

aap ki pehli koshish hi kamaal ki hai bauhat hi khubsurat shair likha hai aap nai /rose

aur haan is bachai ko wakai cricket team mein hona chahiyai he is simply adorable

khush rahiyai
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khush rahiyai aur likhtai rahiyai /rose
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sab sey pehley tu HG pe khush amdeed

dosrey ye yaqeen nahi aata k aap ko shairi sey shagaf nahi.... kamal ka sher share kiya hay aap nay janab .. beintaha khoobsurat

khush raheye likhte raheye k bohat aacha likh saktey hain aap
khushaamdeed kehnay ka shukriya

lol yaqeen keejiyay mujhay shairy se koi khaas saghaf nahi bas kabhi kabhi kisi hamd ya naat ka sher sun kar ya parh kar zaroor sar dhunnay lagta hoon

aur e ekh kar aur soch kar hairat hoti hai k nabi kareem (saw) ki tareef 14 so saal se ho rahi hai aur qiyamat tak hoti rahegi lekin kitnay logon nay likha hai aur un k liyay tareef k lafz hi khatam nahi hotay
yaqeenan ye aik maujizah hai aur beshak wo dunya k kaamil tareen insaan hain
Allah paak humay un k naqshay qadam par chalnay ki taufeeq ataa farmaay k wohi ik nijaat ka rastaa hai
aur wo kya kehtay hain k mohabbat sabhi se karo lekin ISHQ sirf usi se karo jo kabhi judaa na ho , jee haaan wo Allaah rabb-e-zuljalaal hi ki laazawaal zaat hai ,aur us tak pohanchnaa bohat mushkil hai lekin abhi hum chalnay ki koshish hi kartay hain k wo aagay barh kar hamay apni meherbaan aaghosh me le letay hain bilkul us bahay ki tarah k jab shuru me ow larkharata hua baap ki taraf chalnay ki koshish karta hai to us k girnay se pelay hi paab aagay barh kar usay sanbhaal leta hai
khush rahiyyay
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/aoa
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bohat khoob janab!!!!
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