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Hamd ( ik chhoti c koshish)

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Old 02-05-2005, 09:01 AM
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asaalam o alaikum saathiyon!
main ne kafi poetriez likhi hain jin main se kuch maine is section main post b ki hain...i knw meri poetry itni achhi nahi hai mujhe koi khaas result nahi mila bas tassali baksh ans hi mila well meri shuru se khuwahish thi k main apne Allah Tallah k bare main kuch likhoon un ki tareeef karoon wese Allah Tallah k hum per kafi karam hain un ka jitna shukar kiya jaay kam hai un ki jitni tareeef ki jaay kam hai.....sari tareefen Allah Tallah ki zaat k liye hi hain ...maine bas ik chhoti c koshish ki hai..ager mujh se galti huwi hai to Allah mujhe maaf kare aur aap se req. hai k aap mujhe bataain k maine kahaan per kon c ghalti ki hai oki thanx a lot
TERA hi zikr yeh hawaain karti hai,
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poori kaainaat main jalve hain TERE,
saaare aaalam ko hai TERI hi justajooo.
har haaal main, har waqt main haazir hai TU hi,
chaahe pukaar len TUJHE har jagah maujood hai TU ru ba rooo.
nahi koi TUJH sa meherbaan TU hi hum sab ka maboood hai,
koi nahi TERA shareek nahi koi TUJH sa hu ba hoooo.
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MASHALLAH,,,,,,,,,JA ZAKALLAH,,,,,,,,,@};-
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MASHAALLAH achhe koshish hay lagta hay perveen shakir nay dobara janam lay lia hay:phool
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MASHAALLAH achhe koshish hay lagta hay perveen shakir nay dobara janam lay lia hay:phool
oh thanx a lot
take care n alwayz b happy@};-
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thank u jeee......
take care n b happy@};-
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thanx miss guriya
take care n be happy oki @};-
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