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Ham to saya tera ban jayen agar tu chahe

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azizam salaam...

kaise hain aap.

aap ke pass khiyaal hai lekon us khiyaal mein rang bharne ke liye diction ki kami hai jo aista asita door ho jayeegi koshish kareen ke ilfaaz ka takraar ziyaada na ho.. un ke mutbadal munasib ilfaaz talash kareen ziyaada se ziyaada matalih kareen
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Qamar Bhai, aap ka ehsaan hai ke meri har ulti seedhi kawish per apni qeemti raye zaroor dete hain...warna ye kawishat is qabil nahin...aap ki rehnumai shamil-e-haal rahi to shaed kabhi kuch kehna seekh sakoon....duaon main zaroor yaad rakhiyega
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Saraab Bhai, Mujhe marhoom Saleem Ahmed ke kisi majmooa-e-kalaam ka naam to batayye...main unko parhna chahta hoon...suna hai ke aap un ke bohot close rahe hain
agar aap ko sirf unki shairi se dilchaspi hai to "Bayaaz", "Ikaayi" aur "Charagh-e-Neem Shab" dekh lijye. Waise wo shaire ke ilawa bohot bohot kuch the.

Duaon main yaad rakhiyega ke iski sakht zaroorat hai.
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Aik achi kawish hai aap ki Saraabs

Qamar sahib ne jaisay kaha diction ki taraf thori tawaju kerain. Qawafi ki itni repetetion bhee sahi nahin hoti.

Baqi khiyaal umdaah haiN aap k

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wahhhh... bohat khubsoorat ghazal hai bhai... bohat si dad qubool kijiye..

magar waqqai qawafi ki takrar say ghazal ka husn mutasir ho raha hai...

bohat khush rahiye...Allah karay zor-e-qalam aur ziada..
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wahhhh... bohat khubsoorat ghazal hai bhai... bohat si dad qubool kijiye..

magar waqqai qawafi ki takrar say ghazal ka husn mutasir ho raha hai...

bohat khush rahiye...Allah karay zor-e-qalam aur ziada..
Aap ne ghazal parhi....behad shukr guzaar hoon....duaon main zaroor yaad rakhen
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.......agar tu chahe
Wah.....Kiya Kehny Bohat Khobsurat Gazal Kahi App Ne.

Tu jo keh de to pukaaren sar-e-bazaar tujhe
ajnabi ban ke guzar jayen agar tu chahe.

Jazbat Se bharpur Iss Gazal K Liye Bohat Bohat Si Dad Kabool Kijiye...
Sada Khush Rahain.
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.......agar tu chahe
Wah.....Kiya Kehny Bohat Khobsurat Gazal Kahi App Ne.

Tu jo keh de to pukaaren sar-e-bazaar tujhe
ajnabi ban ke guzar jayen agar tu chahe.

Jazbat Se bharpur Iss Gazal K Liye Bohat Bohat Si Dad Kabool Kijiye...
Sada Khush Rahain.
Natiq Sahab, ek behangam si kawish ki yun pazeerai per aap ka bohot mashkoor hoon....Ramzan ki duaon main yaad rakhiyega
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bhot khoobsorat ghazal kahi apne saraab bhai...
jis tarah ek dost ne farmaya ke jazbaat se bharpoor ghazal hai....
plz agar ap mind na karein tu batadengaiN ke ap kitnay arsay se poetry ker rahay haiN.....jan ker khushi hogi
Ap ne kaha duaoon ki zaroorat hai tu bhai ham hamesha apkeliya dua go rahengaiN....ap bhi plz hamaray liay dua kia kareiN...
Allah hamesha apko apne saye main rakhay
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