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hal e dil tum ko sunaoN bhei tu kiya

This is a discussion on hal e dil tum ko sunaoN bhei tu kiya within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; hal e dil tum ko sunaoN bhei tu kiya dastan e hijr butlaooN bhei tu kiya ais khil khylati hunsii ...


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Old 04-26-2008, 01:49 PM
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hal e dil tum ko sunaoN bhei tu kiya
dastan e hijr butlaooN bhei tu kiya

ais khil khylati hunsii key pichay
chupa hey jo gum sonaoon bhei tu kiya

diyar e ger mein jo kut rahein hein shamein
ais by basi ki dastan dohraon bhei tu kiya

jub khud hi mohubbat mein mit na sakey
by rukhi pey unkay ilzaam bhei tu kiya

hal e dil e sakusta ko kis per karon ayaan
viraaniyon mein jo konji ! sada bhei tu kiya
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Assalamualaik,


achchi kavish hai, likhtey rahye aur share kartey rahiye

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achi koshish hai.. last do ash'ar maiN aapne qafiya tabdeel kar dia..

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very nice................ ....
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v nice................ .............
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pasund kernay ka shukria , aur bihtur likhney ki koshish karon ga
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