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This is a discussion on hal e dil tum ko sunaoN bhei tu kiya within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; hal e dil tum ko sunaoN bhei tu kiya dastan e hijr butlaooN bhei tu kiya ais khil khylati hunsii ...
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| hal e dil tum ko sunaoN bhei tu kiya dastan e hijr butlaooN bhei tu kiya ais khil khylati hunsii key pichay chupa hey jo gum sonaoon bhei tu kiya diyar e ger mein jo kut rahein hein shamein ais by basi ki dastan dohraon bhei tu kiya jub khud hi mohubbat mein mit na sakey by rukhi pey unkay ilzaam bhei tu kiya hal e dil e sakusta ko kis per karon ayaan viraaniyon mein jo konji ! sada bhei tu kiya |
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#2
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| Assalamualaik, achchi kavish hai , likhtey rahye aur share kartey rahiyeAllah hafiz
__________________ Yadash Bakahir ham bhi aadi thay dil lagi kay Ab khwab ki hain batein qissay thay jo kabhi kay |
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![]() achi koshish hai.. last do ash'ar maiN aapne qafiya tabdeel kar dia.. khush rahiye
__________________ ![]() . . . Mere dil.. Mere musaafir..! |
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#4
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| very nice................ .... |
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#5
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| v nice................ ............. |
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#6
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| pasund kernay ka shukria , aur bihtur likhney ki koshish karon ga |
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