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Haiku nazm

This is a discussion on Haiku nazm within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Salaam Urdu Haiku style kii aik nazm k saath haazir ho raha hooN! Umeed hai her baar kii tarah apni ...


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Old 07-03-2005, 07:18 AM
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Salaam

Urdu Haiku style kii aik nazm k saath haazir ho raha hooN!

Umeed hai her baar kii tarah apni qeemti aaraa se zaroor mujhay faa'ida uThaane ka mauqa zaroor daiNgay aap dost


Falak kee god
Samandar kee lehroN meN
DhooNDtaa hooN main

Woh aysii kamii
Jo dil k aaNgan meN hai
Gul k hotay bhii

TitliyaaN akser
Mujhse keh k jaatii haiN
KyuN naheiN yaaN per

Noor pehla saa
Jagmagaate sitaare
Chaand kaa pehraa

Mahtaab kay bhii
Maathay pe kyuN daaGh hai
KyuN yeh be.basi?

LaboN ko jumbish
KyuN naheiN daytay ho tum
Kuch batao naa

Kya bata’ooN main
Kya mera armaan hai
Who kya kamii hai

Sun sakogay kya
Dukh bharii daastaaN tum
Weeraan raaheiN

Sunsaan baaheiN
Dil kee soonii galiyaaN
Taareek hujra

Bas hai to yahaaN
Seher terii kamii hai
Aur kuch naheiN …


Khaksaar

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kiya kehne hain ap k to QASSIM bhai ji likhte hain 'Bas hai to yahaaN
Seher terii kamii hai Aur kuch naheiN …' /wah ji /wah veri nice ji /clap5
meri taraf se daad qaboo lkijiye /yhug
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Old 07-04-2005, 12:25 PM
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salam

Sun sakogay kya
Dukh bharii daastaaN tum
Weeraan raaheiN

Sunsaan baaheiN
Dil kee soonii galiyaaN
Taareek hujra

Bas hai to yahaaN
Seher terii kamii hai
Aur kuch naheiN …


qasim bhai kiya hi kehnay hain aapke....ALLAH pak apke qalam main mazeed say mazeeed nikhar laye /dua

khush rahiye
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kiya kehne hain ap k to QASSIM bhai ji likhte hain 'Bas hai to yahaaN
Seher terii kamii hai Aur kuch naheiN …' /wah ji /wah veri nice ji /clap5
meri taraf se daad qaboo lkijiye /yhug
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Sun sakogay kya
Dukh bharii daastaaN tum
Weeraan raaheiN

Sunsaan baaheiN
Dil kee soonii galiyaaN
Taareek hujra

Bas hai to yahaaN
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Aur kuch naheiN …


qasim bhai kiya hi kehnay hain aapke....ALLAH pak apke qalam main mazeed say mazeeed nikhar laye /dua

khush rahiye
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Buhat khoob Qasim bahi ,, buhat achi lagi app ki ya Haiku style ki nazam ,, buhat sii daad qabool karain /weldone
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Buhat khoob Qasim bahi ,, buhat achi lagi app ki ya Haiku style ki nazam ,, buhat sii daad qabool karain /weldone
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