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This is a discussion on Haiku within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Dosto! Kuch arsa pehlay aik Haiku huvii thii ... Aap sab k saath share ker chuka hooN pehlay, aik baar ...
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![]() Dosto! Kuch arsa pehlay aik Haiku huvii thii ... Aap sab k saath share ker chuka hooN pehlay, aik baar aur isay bardaaSHt keejiay ![]() ![]() Qassim Mirza :Qassim:
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:wah pahle bhi pari thi tab bhi buhat achi lagi thi aur ab bhi really nice1 Allah pak aap ko buhat kush rakhe Ameen
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![]() Bohot shukria dear Asma ![]() Qassim Mirza :Qassim: |
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| Qasim bhai jitni meri knowledge hay Haiku kay baray mein.. tou iss mein pehlay aur teesra misra hum qafiya aur hum wazan honay chahiyeiN... agar mein ghalat hooN tou meri taraf se ma'azrat... ummed hay aap meri tasheeh bhi farma deingay
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![]() Baraderam Haiku k silsile meN jitna illm mujhay hai woh yeh hai k pehle aur doosre misra ka ham qaafia hona shart/zaroorii naheiN hai ... Agar koi pehle aur doosre misre ko ham.qaafia rakhe to yaqeenan kalaam k husn meN izaafaa hoga ![]() Qassim Mirza :Qassim: Last edited by :Qassim:; 02-25-2006 at 10:24 PM. |
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| AOA Qasim ji .. aap ki yeh kavish bohat pasand aai.. keep sharing
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![]() Thank you very much Strawberry jee ![]() Qassim Mirza :Qassim: |
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| wahh qasim bhai....haiku personally mujhay bohat pasand hai....thoray sai elfaz main insan bohat bari aur gehri baat kah jata hai..aur aap nai bakhobi yeh kam kia hai,.... ![]() bohat khoob...laikin ager aap mind na karian tou aik baat bataon..... ....faqat main tay nahi to'en aati hai... ....woh tootay wali...![]()
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