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khud se lerney ki aarzoo
aarzoo ki takmeel ki khwahish
yehi kul asasa hai zindagee...


Janaab aapkii koShiSh pasand aa'ee ... Magar iss Haiku kii technicality k baare meN aap se kuch kehna hai ... Umeed hai aap merii baat ka bura naheiN maanaiNgay!

Haiku kuch iss andaaZ se likhii jaatii hai:

1. Pehla misre meN paanchh (5) syllables hote hai
2. Doosre misre meN saath (7) syllables, aur
3. Teesre misre meN paanchh (5) syllables

Waise to to Haiku kehte waqt wazan ka hona zaroorii naheiN hai, magar aap agar isay wazan meN keh sakaiN to bohot khoob ... Jaisa k pehla (1st) aur teesra (3rd) misra aik hee wazan ka ho to achchha lagega paRhne ... Doosra (2nd) misra to kisii surat pehlay aur teesre misra ka ham wazan naheiN ho sakta kyuN k 1st aur 3rd misre 5 syllables k haiN aur doosra mirsa 7 syllables ka

Micaal k taur per merii aik koShiSh per nazar fermaa'iay:


MaiN ne iss Haiku ko iss beher per kaha hai:

Mu-ta-faa-i-lun
Mu-ta-faa-i-lun Faa-lun
Mu-ta-faa-i-lun

1-1-2-1-2
1-1-2-1-2 2-2
1-1-2-1-2


Umeed kerta hooN mere iss response se aap k illm meN kuch izaafaa huva hoga

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likhtai rahiyai and keep sharing
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Janaab aapkii koShiSh pasand aa'ee ... Magar iss Haiku kii technicality k baare meN aap se kuch kehna hai ... Umeed hai aap merii baat ka bura naheiN maanaiNgay!

Haiku kuch iss andaaZ se likhii jaatii hai:

1. Pehla misre meN paanchh (5) syllables hote hai
2. Doosre misre meN saath (7) syllables, aur
3. Teesre misre meN paanchh (5) syllables

Waise to to Haiku kehte waqt wazan ka hona zaroorii naheiN hai, magar aap agar isay wazan meN keh sakaiN to bohot khoob ... Jaisa k pehla (1st) aur teesra (3rd) misra aik hee wazan ka ho to achchha lagega paRhne ... Doosra (2nd) misra to kisii surat pehlay aur teesre misra ka ham wazan naheiN ho sakta kyuN k 1st aur 3rd misre 5 syllables k haiN aur doosra mirsa 7 syllables ka

Micaal k taur per merii aik koShiSh per nazar fermaa'iay:


MaiN ne iss Haiku ko iss beher per kaha hai:


Mu-ta-faa-i-lun

Mu-ta-faa-i-lun Faa-lun
Mu-ta-faa-i-lun

1-1-2-1-2
1-1-2-1-2 2-2
1-1-2-1-2


Umeed kerta hooN mere iss response se aap k illm meN kuch izaafaa huva hoga

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kiya haal hai bhai?
bohut khushi hui k aap ney mujh nacheez per itni ghri nazar rakhi
bhai main poet tu nai hoon iss liye jin bareekiyon ka aap ney zikar kiya hai unn k barey main nai jaanta bas kabhi kabhi koi khayal atta hai tu uss ko likh leta hoon. lekin ab aap ne itna kuch bataya hai tu main yeh zaroor chahoon ga k jo kuch aap ney bataya hai iss k barey main tafseel se mujhey batayen. i hope k aap mujhey seekhney ka moqa do gey.
be happi alwayz
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