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This is a discussion on hai teri yaad ab jidher jaein within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; aik taaza ghazal hazir e khidmat hai beqarari ajab, kidher jaein hai teri yaad ab jidher jaein Umr aisay tamam ...
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| aik taaza ghazal hazir e khidmat hai ![]() beqarari ajab, kidher jaein hai teri yaad ab jidher jaein Umr aisay tamam ker jaein saray pal teray naam ker jaein jhukti aankhoN ki hai adaa aesi chup rahein aur kalaam ker jaein gar tera sath ho humein jaanaN waqt ko hum ghulaam ker jaein mahwishoN se ho dosti bas youn door reh ker salaam ker jaein khwaab Ahsan tumhari aankho mein youn na ho toot ker bikher jaein
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Aap Ki Ghazal Mujhay Bouhat Pasand Aai..Bouhat Daad Qubool Kijiye..Masha Allah Acha Likhtay Hai'n...![]()
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| bohut khoob ahsan bohut dinon bad kuch naya likha deha aap ka daad qubool kijye
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lutf mila parh kr... go k 3rd, 4th aur 5th sher maiN aap ne qafia aur radeef tabdeel kr diya, but phir bhi isy aik mukamal ghazal kaha ja sakta hy, ager in ashaar maiN "ker" ko qafia tasawur kiya ja'ay to.... wesy koshish krni chahiay k reader ko is qism ki confusion na ho.... overall tamaam ahsaar bohat achy haiN, mujhy bohat pasand aa'ay... isi trha acha acha kalaam likhty aur ham se share krty raheN... Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziada ata kary...
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| Buhat khoob Ahsan , Mukhtasir behar ki aik dilkash ghazal buhat umdah Regards Samra
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| Aap sab ki hausla afzaai ka behad shukria |
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#7
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| very nice bohat khub
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