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hai teri yaad ab jidher jaein

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Old 02-20-2007, 07:23 PM
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aik taaza ghazal hazir e khidmat hai


beqarari ajab, kidher jaein
hai teri yaad ab jidher jaein

Umr aisay tamam ker jaein
saray pal teray naam ker jaein

jhukti aankhoN ki hai adaa aesi
chup rahein aur kalaam ker jaein

gar tera sath ho humein jaanaN
waqt ko hum ghulaam ker jaein

mahwishoN se ho dosti bas youn
door reh ker salaam ker jaein

khwaab Ahsan tumhari aankho mein
youn na ho toot ker bikher jaein
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Aap Ki Ghazal Mujhay Bouhat Pasand Aai..Bouhat Daad Qubool Kijiye..Masha Allah Acha Likhtay Hai'n...
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bohut khoob ahsan bohut dinon bad kuch naya likha deha aap ka
daad qubool kijye
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aik taaza ghazal hazir e khidmat hai


beqarari ajab, kidher jaein
hai teri yaad ab jidher jaein

Umr aisay tamam ker jaein
saray pal teray naam ker jaein

jhukti aankhoN ki hai adaa aesi
chup rahein aur kalaam ker jaein

gar tera sath ho humein jaanaN
waqt ko hum ghulaam ker jaein

mahwishoN se ho dosti bas youn
door reh ker salaam ker jaein

khwaab Ahsan tumhari aankho mein
youn na ho toot ker bikher jaein
bai wah Ahsan bhai kiya khoob ghazal kahi hy...
lutf mila parh kr...
go k 3rd, 4th aur 5th sher maiN aap ne qafia aur radeef tabdeel kr diya, but phir bhi isy aik mukamal ghazal kaha ja sakta hy, ager in ashaar maiN "ker" ko qafia tasawur kiya ja'ay to.... wesy koshish krni chahiay k reader ko is qism ki confusion na ho....

overall tamaam ahsaar bohat achy haiN, mujhy bohat pasand aa'ay...
isi trha acha acha kalaam likhty aur ham se share krty raheN...

Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziada ata kary...
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Buhat khoob Ahsan ,
Mukhtasir behar ki aik dilkash ghazal
buhat umdah

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Aap sab ki hausla afzaai ka behad shukria
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very nice
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