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Old 06-14-2007, 06:30 PM
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Hi.mein zatie toar per afsana negar houn ghazal mein ek afsana lea ker hazar hoie houn. shukria

haathoun ko meray tham ke woh payar se bola
mangoun ga tujeh Allah se kisi aur se neigh

aanchal meray sar pe pehla ke ye kaha
izaat hai tu marie kisi aur ki neigh
mathay pe meray bosa dia aur sisak pera
paya hai mushkil se tujeh chorana neigh
senay se laga ker mujeh payar se kaha
aaoun ga mein zaroor mujeh bohlna neigh

ab zindagi mein kie moar aien gay
dekho khabi bhi hemaat harna neigh
janey ke baad os ke ehsaas ye huwa
os shakas ke bena koi zindagi neigh
her rooz khat mila to her bar ye lekha
din mein to bahal jata hai dil raat mein neigh
bersun ke baad woh mila dukh se roo dia
zinda houn teray beghair ye koi zindagi neigh

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Old 06-14-2007, 06:51 PM
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Poet club main khush aamdeed Yasmin saaheba,
aap ki yeh kaawish bahot khoob hai,so bahot si daad qabool kijiye,
aek baat aor kehta chaloon ke ghazal kehney ke liye chand asoolon ko mad-e-nazar rakhna hota hai,jin ko shaairy ke ramooz kehtey hain,so apni shaairy main mazeed nikhaar paida karney ke liye, koshish kijiye ke un ramooz se bhi waaqfiyat haasil karain, is ke liye yaheen oopar aek thread hai "Poetry Tutorials" ke naam se,ho sakey to us ko dekh lijiye,mujhey yaqeen hai ke aap ke liye bahot faaida mand ho gi,
bahot khush rahiye,aor likhti rahiye,
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khoob hy yasmin sahiba, acha afsana pesh kiya ghazl ki shakl meiN... wesy afsanvi nazm to sun rakha tha, "afsanvi ghazal" pehly nahi suna tha...

ghazal k bunyadi usool-o-zawabit k tehat zain bhai ki batoN pr ghor kijiay ga... u'll learn a lot....

isi trha likhti raheN, aur ham se share krti raheN...
Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziada ata kary,
khush raheN, aaabad raheN....
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Hi. passanad edgie ka shukaria zain bhi ke masweray per amal kia haiagay bhi app sabki rehnumie milay gi to maskoor houn gi dua k saath Yasmin Yasi
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