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This is a discussion on haathoun ko meray thaam ke............. within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Hi.mein zatie toar per afsana negar houn ghazal mein ek afsana lea ker hazar hoie houn. shukria haathoun ko meray ...
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| Hi.mein zatie toar per afsana negar houn ghazal mein ek afsana lea ker hazar hoie houn. shukria haathoun ko meray tham ke woh payar se bola mangoun ga tujeh Allah se kisi aur se neigh aanchal meray sar pe pehla ke ye kaha izaat hai tu marie kisi aur ki neigh mathay pe meray bosa dia aur sisak pera paya hai mushkil se tujeh chorana neigh senay se laga ker mujeh payar se kaha aaoun ga mein zaroor mujeh bohlna neigh ab zindagi mein kie moar aien gay dekho khabi bhi hemaat harna neigh janey ke baad os ke ehsaas ye huwa os shakas ke bena koi zindagi neigh her rooz khat mila to her bar ye lekha din mein to bahal jata hai dil raat mein neigh bersun ke baad woh mila dukh se roo dia zinda houn teray beghair ye koi zindagi neigh Yasmin Yasi |
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#2
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| Poet club main khush aamdeed Yasmin saaheba, ![]() aap ki yeh kaawish bahot khoob hai,so bahot si daad qabool kijiye, ![]() aek baat aor kehta chaloon ke ghazal kehney ke liye chand asoolon ko mad-e-nazar rakhna hota hai,jin ko shaairy ke ramooz kehtey hain,so apni shaairy main mazeed nikhaar paida karney ke liye, koshish kijiye ke un ramooz se bhi waaqfiyat haasil karain, is ke liye yaheen oopar aek thread hai "Poetry Tutorials" ke naam se,ho sakey to us ko dekh lijiye,mujhey yaqeen hai ke aap ke liye bahot faaida mand ho gi,![]() bahot khush rahiye,aor likhti rahiye, ![]()
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#3
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Welcome ![]() Mujhay Aap Ki Kawish Bouhat Pasand Aai...Thoughts Nay Mutasir Kiya...Mashq-e-Sukhan Jaari Rakhiye Insha Allah Bouhat Jald Poetry Mai'n Mazeed Nikhaar Aaey Ga...Mairi Janib Say Bouhat Daad Qubool Kijiye... ![]()
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#4
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| khoob hy yasmin sahiba, acha afsana pesh kiya ghazl ki shakl meiN... wesy afsanvi nazm to sun rakha tha, "afsanvi ghazal" pehly nahi suna tha... ghazal k bunyadi usool-o-zawabit k tehat zain bhai ki batoN pr ghor kijiay ga... u'll learn a lot.... isi trha likhti raheN, aur ham se share krti raheN... Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziada ata kary, khush raheN, aaabad raheN....
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#5
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| nice one................. ....
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#6
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| Hi. passanad edgie ka shukaria zain bhi ke masweray per amal kia haiagay bhi app sabki rehnumie milay gi to maskoor houn gi dua k saath Yasmin Yasi |
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#7
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| bohat khub
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