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RulesThis is a discussion on haal dil ka bhi howa meri wafaon jesa....! within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Assalam-o-alikum... HG k khush nazar logoN ki nazr meri aik adna si koshish...
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#1
12-08-2007, 06:22 PM
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Assalam-o-alikum...  HG k khush nazar logoN ki nazr meri aik adna si koshish 
__________________  Ab os k baad laga DiL to DiL lagi hogi Hum os pe apni mohabt tamaam kr aaye...!                   |
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12-09-2007, 11:28 AM
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Wah wah wah......mohtarma... .kia hi umda aur shandaar ghazal likhi hai aap ne....maza agaya parh kar....bohot bohot saari daad qubool kijye poori ghazal ke liye aur bilkhusoos in 3 ash'aar ke liye ke in ki to kuch baat hi aur hai: Mujh ko har haal maiN seenay se lagaye rakha Dard mausam ka rawayya bhi tha maaoN jaisa Meri sochoN ki pohuNch se bhi kaheeN door tha jo Mere haathoN maiN simaT aaya duaaoN jaisa Koyee to aaeena-ru ham bhi kabhi dekheNge Jo bhi milta hai wo hota hai KhudaaoN jaisa
__________________ ******************** ******************** **** Adaab teri bazm ke jeenay nahiN daitay DeewanoN ko jeenay ki tamanna to baRi hay (Qabil Ajmeri) |
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12-10-2007, 08:13 AM
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Koi to aayeena ro ham b kabhi dekhen gey jo b milta hia wo hota hia KHudayon jaisa... Bahut khoobsoorat ghazal, Kanwal ji...
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12-10-2007, 09:50 AM
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Mujh ko har haal maiN seenay se lagaye rakha Dard mausam ka rawayya bhi tha maaoN jaisa Koyee to aaeena-ru ham bhi kabhi dekheNge Jo bhi milta hai wo hota hai KhudaaoN jaisa Kia khobsoorat ghazal kahi hai Kanwal Aap ne, dil khush ho gaya perh ker. Tamaam ashaar hi bht se bhee ziyda umdaah hain. Allah aap k kalam k mazeed taraqee day ameen Khush rehiya
__________________ Signature Removed - Only One Image is Allowed Tu Aik Image Remove Ker Daitay Poora Signature Q Remove Ker diya  |
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#5
12-10-2007, 01:33 PM
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kanawal apki ghazal pari, pori ki pori ghazal takhayul aor taghazul sey bher poor ha, kanwal ap itna acha likhti hain kay hum apki poetry kay qader daan hogaye, ab tu apkay new kalam ka shidat sey intizaar rehta ha, meri dowa ha Allah apko humaishah khush rakhay Ameen.
__________________  kaash aisa kamal hojayewo mera hum khayal hojaye |
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12-11-2007, 01:35 PM
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ye aap ki zarah nawazi hai k aap ko mera likha pasand aaya bohat khush rahin aabad rahin.... |
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12-11-2007, 01:38 PM
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meray likhay ko parhnay k qabil samjha.... |
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#8
12-11-2007, 01:41 PM
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haal dil ka bhi howa meri wafaon jesa....! 
