Urdu Poetry Forum

**cute mary** · #1 01-31-2008, 01:39 PM

SALAM,
AIK KAHANI AP LOGOUN SE SHARE KAR RAHAY HAIN HOPE AP SABKO PASAND AYGI............

GUZRA HUA ZAMANA,
AAJ PHIR SE YAD AYA
WO MUSMOUN KI RUT THI,WO PYAR KA JAHAN THA
AIK KHUSHI KA ASMAN THA,THAKTA NAHI BARASTE
SAB GHAM BHI DHO DALE,KHUSHYU K GUL KHILA K
CHIRYA THI CHEHCHAHATI
HER PERH MUSKURA KER,DETA THA APNA SAYA
AIK PYAR KA SAMA THA,REHTE THE SATH HUM TUM
CHAHAT KA SILSILA THA
TUM MUJH SE ROTH JAO,MAIN TUMSE ROTHTA THA
TUM MUJHKO HANSATI THI,MAIN TUMKO MANATA THA
PER AIK DAFA HUA YUN,ANDHI KA NIKLA BHANWRA
TUM PHOT PHOT RODI,MAIN TUMKO DHONDTA THA
PER KIA KISE KHABER THI,SAB KUCH DHUAN DHUAN THA
KOI NAHI THA SATHI,SAB KUCH BICHAR CHUKA THA
MAIN TANHA JABHI HUA THA,MAIN THAK K ROPARA THA
MASIHA NAHI THA KOI
TANHAIYU NE THAMA,MERA YEH HATH US DIN
AB TAK NAHI HAI TOTA,TANHAIYU SE NATA
LO ANKH MERI PHIR SE KEHTI HAI KIA FASANA
RO DEIN YEH YAD KAR K

GUZRA HUA ZAMANA...........!!!

**luckylibra** · #2 02-01-2008, 07:12 AM

nice sharing but kuch rowani ki kami thi... but koshish jari rekhiye ga.. ore dad qabool kerin

jahan rahain bohat bohat ziada khush rhan
bohat bohat ziada dauon kay sath
emmran

roshanay · #3 02-01-2008, 12:20 PM

bohat acha goooddddddd......... .keep sharing

**cute mary** · #4 02-01-2008, 02:06 PM

shukriya ap sab k pasand karne k lye aur ju kami hai usko pora karne ki koshish jari hai
apna khayal rakhyega

**yasmin ahmad** · #5 02-01-2008, 05:02 PM

nice................ ......

**kanch ki mehroo** · #6 02-02-2008, 12:07 AM

walikum asalam..

umda nazm kahi aapne... kuch muqamat par rawani toot'ti hui mehsoos hui... maine kuch tabdeeliyaN ki haiN nazm maiN,, daikhiye;

guzar hua zamana
aaya hai yad phir say
woh pur bahaar mausam... woh piyar ki fizayeN
ik aasmaN khushi ka... thakta na tha barastay
sab ghum bhi dhul gaye thay... khushiyoN k gul khilay thay
chiriya thi chehchahati..
har pair muskura kar.. daita tha apna saya
woh piyar ka samaN tha.. rehtay thay sath hum tum..
chahat ka silsila tha..
tum mujh say rooth jateeN...maiN tum say roothta tha..
yooNhi ulfatoN k saye...dabay paooN waqt guzra..
sahil pe doobi kashti.. aandhi ka nikla bhanwra
tum phoot phoot ro deeN.. maiN toot toot bikhra
sab kuch dhuwaN dhuwaN tha.. maiN tum ko dhoondta tha..
sathi na koi humdam.. sab kuch bichar chuka tha
saya mila na koi.. maiN thak k ro dia tha..
koi na tha maseeha..
tanhaiyoN ne thama.. mera yeh hath us pal
ab tak nahiN hai toota... tanhaiyoN say nata
likha hai aansuoN say... qismat ne yeh fasana..
aya hai yad phir say..
guzra hua zamana..

khayal bohat umda hai nazm ka..

khush rahiye

**cute mary** · #7 02-02-2008, 12:59 PM

shukriya ap sab ka aur mehro sahiba ap ka bohat shukriya k ap ne humari nazam ko sirf parha hi nahi balke apni tawajjah se bhi nawaza hai hum ap k k bohat ashkoor hai aap ki tabdeli humko pasand aai hai agr mumkin hu sake tu is ko ap aese hi change kar k post kardejye aur aik sawal k humko yeh samajh nahi araha hay k her member k nam k sath kuch na kuch likha hai kese kisi main moderator kisi main star member kisi main juniour member etc.tu kia yeh aap logoun ki taraf se given hai ya humko dalna parhta hai,plss advice me anyone
apna khayal rakhyega

**kanch ki mehroo** · #8 02-02-2008, 05:49 PM

cute yeh tags ... (except Moderator, Super Moderator, Administrator, Poets and writers) Post count ki base par diye jatay haiN... 1000 posts karnay par star member ka tag dia jata hai... 5000 par HG Lover.. aur isi tarah mazeed...

**cute mary** · #9 02-03-2008, 12:44 PM

thnx ohh yaar yani humko kai saal mehnat k baad yeh inaiyat hasil hugi
ok ab hum theek se posts pe dhiyan denge
apna khayal rakhyega

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