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This is a discussion on gum gashta -e-khayal-e-rah-e-shehr-e-yaar tha within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Gum gashta-e-khayale-rahe-shehre-yaar tha Manzil mager safar ki koi khar zaar tha Roota tha gah, gah lagata tha qehqaha Her giz ...
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12-05-2007, 07:09 AM
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Gum gashta-e-khayale-rahe-shehre-yaar tha Manzil mager safar ki koi khar zaar tha Roota tha gah, gah lagata tha qehqaha Her giz mujhe na dil pe koi ikhtiyaar tha Kerta tha koi baat tu mu.Nh pherta tha mai.N Her lafz guftugo ka mere dil pe baar tha Kuch bhi junoo.N ke shoor mai.N aata na tha samajh So dil ko ikhtilaat se yaksar he aar tha Dikhti the jhalak chaand mai.N us mah noor ki Us raat chaand ho baho tamseel-e-yaar tha Aah-e-sahar the naghma-e-subh-e-chaman tu saaz Nakhun ki cher chaar se daaman ka taar tha Last edited by khalidrawat; 12-05-2007 at 09:45 AM.         |
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12-05-2007, 08:55 AM
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Gum gashta-e-khayale-rahe-shehre-yaar tha Manzil mager safar ki koi khar zaar tha Kerta tha koi baat tu mu.Nh pherta tha mai.N Her lafz guftugo ka mere dil pe baar tha Wah Khalid Bhai....ek aur umda ghazal kahi aap ne....khaas kar ke ye do ash'aar...bohot saari daad qubool kijye
__________________ ******************** ******************* MaiN bulata to hooN usko magar aye jazba-e-dil Us pe ban jaye kuch aisi ke bin aaye na banay (Ghalib) |
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12-05-2007, 09:45 AM
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shukriya saraab sahab , aap ki hosla afzai he , |
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12-05-2007, 11:26 AM
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bohut khoob khalid sahab bohut shandaar ghazal likhi ha apnay, humaishah khush rahain.
__________________  kaash aisa kamal hojayewo mera hum khayal hojaye |
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12-06-2007, 08:35 AM
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12-06-2007, 06:20 PM
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Us raat chaand ho baho tamseel-e-yaar tha wahhh janb bohat khoob..... 
__________________  MaiN apni piyaas pr raazi rahoN gi, Miray Aanso miray ''DiL'' Ki kafaalat k liy kaafi rahiN gay...!  |
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12-08-2007, 09:03 AM
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thank you , for appreciation |
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12-10-2007, 12:14 PM
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As-salam-o-alaikum Khalid bhai, khoob ghazal kahi hy aap ne, tamaam shair hi achy lagy mager junoon wala shair kuch siwa hi dil ko laga... bohat si daad is umda nazm ki nazr, khususan is shair ki nazr... Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziada ata kary, khush raheN aabad raheN.....
__________________ tu na jadoN paas channaN! key ay saady paas way, din vi udaas saady, rataaN vi udaas way, luT gya chain sadaa, rus gye hassay way, khushiaN ny dur nssiaN... akhaN cham cham wssiaN!!! |
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12-11-2007, 07:54 AM
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12-11-2007, 09:01 AM
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__________________ tu na jadoN paas channaN! key ay saady paas way, din vi udaas saady, rataaN vi udaas way, luT gya chain sadaa, rus gye hassay way, khushiaN ny dur nssiaN... akhaN cham cham wssiaN!!! |
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