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shaeri ki duniya ke saathiyon ki nazar, ek adna si kawish.


Gulshan mein thi Bahar tumhen sochtey rahey
saanseN theeN khar khar tumhen sochtey rahey

Aayee hawa ke dosh pe ik aashna mehek
ham kho ke ikhtiar tumheN sochtey rahey

chu ke dar-e habib ko lotey tow raah mein
palkeN theeN ashkbar tumhen sochtey rahey

Tanha, sakoot-e shab meIn sar-e aastan-e shauq
sooni thi reh guzar tumheN sochtey rahey

guzrey kisi gali sey tow her naqsh-e pa ke pas
ham ruk ke bar bar tumhen sochtey rahey

RaqsaN thi shehr-e yas mein ik aarzoo Qamar
LerzaaN they dil ke tar tumhen sochtey rahey


Niaz mand

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shaeri ki duniya ke saathiyon ki nazar, ek adna si kawish.


Gulshan mein thi Bahar tumhen sochtey rahey
saanseN theeN khar khar tumhen sochtey rahey

Aayee hawa ke dosh pe ik aashna mehek
ham kho ke ikhtiar tumheN sochtey rahey

chu ke dar-e habib ko lotey tow raah mein
palkeN theeN ashkbar tumhen sochtey rahey

Tanha, sakoot-e shab meIn sar-e aastan-e shauq
sooni thi reh guzar tumheN sochtey rahey

guzrey kisi gali sey tow her naqsh-e pa ke pas
ham ruk ke bar bar tumhen sochtey rahey

RaqsaN thi shehr-e yas mein ik aarzoo Qamar
LerzaaN they dil ke tar tumhen sochtey rahey


Niaz mand

Qamar

As-salam-o-alaikum Qamar bhai...

guzrey kisi gali sey tow her naqsh-e pa ke pas
ham ruk ke bar bar tumhen sochtey rahey

bohat hi shandaar ghazal kahi hy aap ne, lutf hi aa gya, her sheir meiN kamaal dikhaya hy aap ne... mager oper likhy sheir k to lafz lafz ne lutf diya... tamaam ghazal aur khususan is sheir ki nazr meri janib se bohat si daad... qubool kreN... youNhi khoob se khoob ter likhty aur ham se share krty raheN, Allah Mola aap ko shaad-o-aabad rakhy...

aik bat baar baar zehn meiN aa rahi hy, keh hi deta huN. ye zamein kahiN suni hui lag rahi hy....
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wah,bahot khoob janaab,kaya khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai aap ne,dil khush ho gaya paR ke,khaas tor se mundarja baala sher,jo haasil-e-ghazal laga,dheron daad is khoobsurat ghazal ki nazar,qabool kijiye,
bahot khush rahiye,
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ham ruk ke bar bar tumhen sochtey rahey

wahhhh.. Qamar sahib.. kya hi kehnay.. Farhat Abbas Shah ki zameen mein kya khoob ghazal kahi.. insaaf kia.. tamam ashaar umdah hein.. mundarja bala shair ke to kya hi kehnay.. daad qabool kijiye.. Nawazish

wafa aur dua ke saath
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RaqsaN thi shehr-e yas mein ik aarzoo Qamar
LerzaaN they dil ke tar tumhen sochtey rahey

wha kia batt hi sari ghzal achi hi lakan yi doo shair buhat umdha hain app kay
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As-salam-o-alaikum Qamar bhai...

guzrey kisi gali sey tow her naqsh-e pa ke pas
ham ruk ke bar bar tumhen sochtey rahey

bohat hi shandaar ghazal kahi hy aap ne, lutf hi aa gya, her sheir meiN kamaal dikhaya hy aap ne... mager oper likhy sheir k to lafz lafz ne lutf diya... tamaam ghazal aur khususan is sheir ki nazr meri janib se bohat si daad... qubool kreN... youNhi khoob se khoob ter likhty aur ham se share krty raheN, Allah Mola aap ko shaad-o-aabad rakhy...

aik bat baar baar zehn meiN aa rahi hy, keh hi deta huN. ye zamein kahiN suni hui lag rahi hy....
Aap ka husn-e nazar hey Faizan Bhai werna mein kya aur meri tuk bandi kya. Aap jaisey sukhanwar shaer ki ye daad bohat eham hey merey liye.

Aap ney sahi socha, ye zameen waqaee suni huee ho gi aap ki. Is ghazal ki kahani kuch yun hey ke ek intehaai azeez hasti ney ek bar ye sher sunaya:


barish hui to ghar ke dareeche se lag ke hum
chupchaap saug'waar tumheN sochte rahe

bas tabbiyat aisi mozun huee ke isi zameen mein ghazal ho gayee.

Mujhey maloom naheen kis sukhanwar ka kalam hey ye. Ek saheb ka kehna hey ke Farhat Abbas Shah ka hey lekin mein net per un ki collection dekhi hey us mein tow ye ghazal naheeh hey.

Daad ke liye shukria.

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RaqsaN thi shehr-e yas mein ik aarzoo Qamar
LerzaaN they dil ke tar tumhen sochtey rahey

wah,bahot khoob janaab,kaya khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai aap ne,dil khush ho gaya paR ke,khaas tor se mundarja baala sher,jo haasil-e-ghazal laga,dheron daad is khoobsurat ghazal ki nazar,qabool kijiye,
bahot khush rahiye,
Zain Saheb:

bey had shukria janab ke aap ney meri is adna si kawish ko itni tawujuh sey parha isey pasand kiya.

Is sher ki daastaN kuch aisi hey ke poori ghazal ho gayee thi lekin maqta'a naheen ho raha tha aur ek sukhan dost ke gher adbi mehfil thii jis mein mera irada tha isey parhney ka. Tow khana kha ker ek dost ke saath ham tehelney nikley. Raat ka waqt aur wo bhi chaandni raat germi ke mosem ki. Bas chaltey chaltey is sher ki aamad huee aur bas.

Daad ke liye shukria.

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