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This is a discussion on gulshan-e dil mein Khiley hein teri yaadon ke gulab within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Ahle bazm ki khidmat mein ek adna si kawish..... Gulshan-e dil mein Khiley Hein teri yaadon ke gulab Misl-e shabnam ...
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#1
04-14-2008, 07:49 AM
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Ahle bazm ki khidmat mein ek adna si kawish..... Gulshan-e dil mein Khiley Hein teri yaadon ke gulab Misl-e shabnam hay laraztey huey ashkown ka warood Taar-e ehsaas hay mizrab-e alam sey lerzaaN Derd ki Taal pe raqsaaN hay tamanna ka wajood Shama-e shauq farozaaN hay sar-e bazm-e junooN Ho chukey Khak kabhi ke par-e perwana-e hosh Germi-e aatish-e furqat sey sulagti hay hayat hasrat-e deed mein phaili hay nazar ki aaghosh Kash aa jaaey kabhi bam-e tasawur pi hi tu apni aankhon meiN chalaktey huey paimaaney liye Kuch tow halki ho mere derd-e nihaaN ki sozish doob ti aas ko thora sa sahara tow miley Adab Qamar
__________________ Kyun Teri Chashm-e mast ka ehsaaN uthaaiye Zehrab-e may sey ho gham-e hasti ager ghalat Last edited by zehrab; 04-14-2008 at 08:09 AM.         |
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04-14-2008, 08:12 AM
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Kash aa jaaey kabhi bam-e tasawur pi hi tu apni aankhon meiN chalaktey huey paimaaney liye Kuch tow halki ho mere derd-e nihaaN ki sozish doob ti aas ko thora sa sahara tow miley wha buhat umdha
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04-14-2008, 08:19 AM
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Gulshan-e dil mein Khiley Hein teri yaadon ke gulab Misl-e shabnam hay laraztey huey ashkown ka warood Taar-e ehsaas hay mizrab-e alam sey lerzaaN Derd ki Taal pe raqsaaN hay tamanna ka wajood waah kitni khoobsurat tashbeehaat hain........bahot hi khoobsurat nazm k liye dhair saari daad qabool karen |
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#4
04-14-2008, 11:53 AM
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bohat aacha likha hai aap ne khush rahiye
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04-14-2008, 01:36 PM
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Kash aa jaaey kabhi bam-e tasawur pi hi tu apni aankhon meiN chalaktey huey paimaaney liye  Kuch tow halki ho mere derd-e nihaaN ki sozish doob ti aas ko thora sa sahara tow miley wah Qamar saahib kia kehnay khas tour pr under line wala sequence itna khoobsorat laga k cura lainay ka mann kia  MashaAllah shandaar likhtay hain jab bhi likhtay hain 
__________________  MaiN apni piyaas pr raazi rahoN gi, Miray Aanso miray ''DiL'' Ki kafaalat k liy kaafi rahiN gay...!  |
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04-14-2008, 03:26 PM
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bohat khoob qamar sahab apki nazam bohat hi shandar hai parh k bohat mutassir hue alfazoun ka intekhab aur nazam ka ikhtetam k bare main bas kia hi kejye bohat khoob apna khayal rakhyega |
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04-17-2008, 07:08 AM
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Quote:
Khaksar Qamar
__________________ Kyun Teri Chashm-e mast ka ehsaaN uthaaiye Zehrab-e may sey ho gham-e hasti ager ghalat |
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04-23-2008, 07:46 AM
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Quote:
Adab Qamar
__________________ Kyun Teri Chashm-e mast ka ehsaaN uthaaiye Zehrab-e may sey ho gham-e hasti ager ghalat |
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#9
04-23-2008, 08:12 AM
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assalam alaekum, adeeboun aur daneshwaron ke beach main ek adna o kam ilm ko shirkat ka mauqa naseeb houwa hai main bahut shukar guzar hun app ka nazm aur ashar ko kis tharha open kartain hain |
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#10
04-23-2008, 08:21 AM
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buhat umdha ................
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